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Pros and cons about franchise businesses

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In the lecture, the professor made several points about running a franchise business. The professor argues that a franchise business contains a higher level of risk than is otherwise claimed. This is different from the reading, which states that running a franchise business means less risk for the individual franchise owner. The professor´s lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of points that are contrary to the low risk view about franchise businesses. The first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading are the unfavorable franchise agreements. According to the professor, the franchise contracts and the corresponding obligations lead to higher cost of goods and services. This is not what the reading states, it says that the small franchise owner save a lot of money by following these contracts. The lecture cast doubt on this by showing the additional costs resulting from these contracts. Another point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is the topic of advertisement. The professor claims that although every franchise owner has to pay a high fee for advertisements to the franchise company, small owners will not benefit from those advertisements. However, the reading states that the franchise owner benefits from expensive advertisements. The professor doubts this point by stating that the franchise advertisement only advertise the franchise brand itself not the specific business of the franchise owner. So, small business owner will not benefit from these advertisments. In conclusion, the points made in the lecture contrast with the reading. The unfavorable franchise contracts and the low impact of advertisement demonstrate that the view of owning a franchise business as best solution is in doubt.
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made several
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about running a franchise
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business
. The
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argues that a franchise
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business
contains a higher level of
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than is
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claimed. This is
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reading
, which states that running a franchise
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business
means less
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risk
for the individual franchise
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owner
. The
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lecture
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doubt
on the
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by using a number of
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points
that are contrary to the low
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view about franchise businesses.

The
first
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that the
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uses
to
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on the
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reading
are the unfavorable franchise agreements. According to the
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professor
, the franchise contracts and the corresponding obligations lead to higher cost of
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goods
and services. This is not what the
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reading
states, it says that the
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small
franchise
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save
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a lot of
money by following these contracts. The
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cast
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on this by showing the additional costs resulting from these contracts.

Another
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that the
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to
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on the
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reading
is the topic of
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advertisement
. The
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claims that although every franchise
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owner
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has to
pay a high fee for
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advertisements
to the franchise
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company
,
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small
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owners
will not benefit from those
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.
However
, the
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states that the franchise
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benefits from expensive
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. The
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this
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by stating that the franchise
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advertisement
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advertise the franchise brand itself not the specific
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business
of the franchise
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owner
.
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So
,
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small
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will not benefit from these
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advertisments
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In conclusion
, the
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points
made in the
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lecture
contrast with the
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reading
. The unfavorable franchise contracts and the low impact of
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advertisement
demonstrate that the view of owning a franchise
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business
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IELTS essay Pros and cons about franchise businesses

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