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in many countries, people does not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers.

in many countries, people does not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. QVyOP
Most of the Countries are facing issues with people who do not recycle wasted materials, So one of the reasons is the lack of awareness and secondly factories, Governements together are no providing recycles machines every where to be easily used. As a solution for this problem media has a big role of raising people awareness, and governement must disrtibute machines for recycling on roads, malls, school, Hospitals, …. .
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who do not recycle wasted materials,
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one of the reasons is the lack of awareness and
secondly
factories,
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Governements
together are no providing recycles machines
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every where
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easily
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used
. As a solution for this problem media has a
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role of raising
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awareness, and
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governement
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must
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disrtibute
machines for recycling on roads, malls, school, Hospitals, ….
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IELTS essay in many countries, people does not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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