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Many people try to look younger than the really are what the reasons for this?this is positive or negative development

Many people try to look younger than the really are what the reasons for this? this is positive or negative development D6dXo
nowadays Variety of people because of ditferent life problems look tired speceily in their face. hence they attempt to younger than their current age. i belive that this is a dangerous development and the reasons will be discussed in the following stances among with potent example for the same On the one hand in this moderm era most of the people have platura of issues in their life specially women du to these problems the look exhaucted expecally physical. todays most of the women work with their husband to provide necessities for life. Because of these reasons they try to look yonger and bacutitul than the really age.
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current
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dangerous
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moderm
era most of the
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specially
women
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expecally
physical.
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todays
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yonger
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IELTS essay Many people try to look younger than the really are what the reasons for this? this is positive or negative development

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