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Prompt: Should a college education be free? Thesis: College tuition fee should be borne by the government so that higher education can be applied to everyone equally WHAT ABOUT PRIVATE INSTITUTIONS Argument 1: Free college regulation could help students boost their economic stability Argument 2: Free education is a major step towards equality

Prompt: Should a college education be free? Thesis: College tuition fee should be borne by the government so that higher education can be applied to everyone equally WHAT ABOUT PRIVATE INSTITUTIONS Argument 1: Free college regulation could help students boost their economic stability Argument 2: Free education is a major step towards equality M3n2p
Affordability is a major issue for many people around the world when it comes to higher education. Attending college has become an opportunity that has not been equal. Therefore, college tuition fees should be paid by the government so that higher education can be applied to everyone equally. Private institutions can be excluded from this charge free regulation, just like Germany, Austria and many other countries that implement this. It is because the private institutions have their own rights to gain income from the students, but the government needs to take care of the public institutions. Pursuing education is one of the most mandatory responsibilities of a country to the people, just like health care. Unlike many students who are burdened by student loans, free college privilege could help students boost their economic stability. It happens because they could stabilize their own financial matters, without worrying to pay the thousand dollars of debts. The sooner they gain financial independence, it definitely could help the economy of a country. Free education is also a major step towards equality. The more educated ____ people _____, the better the society would be. Because when people are more educated, they can solve problems better. This means that society can progress at a faster rate. The society is most likely improving as the number of educated people keeps growing. In conclusion, many countries have already understood how debt-free education provides positive outcomes. All of the residents have already paid the taxes that are regulated by the government. There are many ways to make tuition-free education possible. Free education for all is a form of giving back from the country to the people. It also shows how education helps to positively impact society overall. Other than that, the greatest investment of all time is human resource investment. As mentioned, there are many advantages to offering affordable college education to everyone around the world.
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around the world when it
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comes
to higher
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education
. Attending college has become an opportunity that has not been equal.
Therefore
, college tuition fees should
be paid
by the
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government
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so
that higher
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education
can
be applied
to everyone
equally
. Private institutions can
be excluded
from this charge
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free
regulation,
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just
like Germany, Austria and
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many
other
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countries
that implement this. It is
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because
the private institutions have their
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own
rights to gain income from the
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students
,
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but
the
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government
needs to take care of the public institutions. Pursuing
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education
is one of the most mandatory responsibilities of a
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country
to the
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people
,
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just
like health care.

Unlike
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many
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students
who
are burdened
by
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student
loans,
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free
college privilege could
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help
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students
boost their economic stability. It happens
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because
they could stabilize their
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own
financial matters, without worrying to pay the thousand dollars of debts. The sooner they gain financial independence, it definitely could
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help
the economy of a
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country
.
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Free
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education
is
also
a major step towards equality. The more educated ____
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people
_____, the better the
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society
would be.
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Because
when
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people
are more educated, they can solve problems better. This means that
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society
can progress at a faster rate. The
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society
is most likely improving as the number of educated
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people
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keeps
growing.

In conclusion
,
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many
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countries
have already understood how debt-free
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education
provides
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positive
outcomes.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
residents have already paid the taxes that
are regulated
by the
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government
. There are
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many
ways to
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make
tuition-free
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education
possible.
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Free
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education
for all is a form of giving back from the
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country
to the
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people
. It
also
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shows
how
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education
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helps
to
positively
impact
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society
overall
. Other than that, the greatest investment of all time is human resource investment. As mentioned, there are
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many
advantages to offering affordable college
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
to everyone around the world.
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IELTS essay Prompt: Should a college education be free? Thesis: College tuition fee should be borne by the government so that higher education can be applied to everyone equally WHAT ABOUT PRIVATE INSTITUTIONS Argument 1: Free college regulation could help students boost their economic stability Argument 2: Free education is a major step towards equality

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
317 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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