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should media be controlled

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Media has always been a great source to provide information to people. However, there have been some arguments between groups of people about how much liberty the media should have in terms of content they can share on air, Web or in the newspapers. Personally, I am against the idea that there should not be any restrictions on the information that media spreads in the world. Firstly, there is a huge risk of false news catching fire and creating panic in the general public without sufficient supportive data. In other words, there are a number of new channels and online websites that deliberately spread untrue negative news to gain TRPs. For instance, in the current COVID-19 situation, the news channels in India have been telling exaggerated numbers of Coronavirus symptoms, cases and deaths which eventually led people having normal cold symptoms to rush to hospitals for Coronavirus tests and creating a difficult situation for doctors. Another issue is that the media usually focuses on negative news and does not show any positive changes occurring in the surroundings. So, it should be made mandatory for the media to share news positive developments in the world. On the contrary, the advocates of the idea that media should be free to distribute all kinds of information state that it is a basic human right of people to know every piece of information that is related to anything or anywhere in the world. That is to say, people will only gain information when they are given an opportunity to. They can stay alert and act timely to any changing situation. All things considered, the media has access to a huge number of people, so it is very important for a government organization to check information which people consume. This will ensure the spread of adequate, useful and true information.
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Media
has always been a great source to provide
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information
to
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.
However
, there have been
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some
arguments between groups of
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people
about how much liberty the
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media
should have in terms of content they can share on air, Web or in the newspapers.
Personally
, I am against the
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idea
that there should not be any restrictions on the
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information
that
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media
spreads in the world.

Firstly
, there is a huge
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risk
of false
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news
catching fire and creating panic in the
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general public
without sufficient supportive data.
In other words
, there are a number of
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new
channels and online websites that
deliberately
spread untrue
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negative
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news
to gain
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TRPs
.
For instance
, in the
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current
COVID-19 situation, the
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news
channels in India have been telling exaggerated numbers of Coronavirus symptoms, cases and deaths which
eventually
led
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people
having normal
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cold
symptoms to rush to hospitals for Coronavirus
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tests
and creating a difficult situation for doctors. Another issue is that the
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media
usually
focuses on
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negative
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news
and does not
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show
any
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positive
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changes
occurring in the surroundings.
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So
, it should
be made
mandatory for the
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media
to share
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news
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positive
developments in the world.

On the contrary
, the advocates of the
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idea
that
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media
should be free to distribute all kinds of
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information
state that it is a basic human right of
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people
to know every piece of
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information
that
is related
to anything or anywhere in the world.
That is
to say,
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people
will
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only
gain
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information
when they are
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given
an opportunity to. They can stay alert and act timely to any changing situation.

All things considered, the
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media
has access to a huge number of
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people
,
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it is
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important
for a
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government
organization to
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check
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information
which
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people
consume. This will ensure the spread of adequate, useful and true
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information
.
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IELTS essay should media be controlled

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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