Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Progress is vital for the governments. If they do not succeed, it would be same as going back

Progress is vital for the governments. If they do not succeed, it would be same as going back yNOVV
Progress is vital for the governments. If they do not succeed, it would be same as going back. Many people believe that economic progress must be the main goal; meanwhile, others say there have much vital indicators; for example, providing a decent health system for citizens. In that essay, I discuss economic and medical points and gave my professional opinion. When subject is process, many people understand it as an economic. Income and consumption numbers are considered by national organisation to calculate progress; In fact, these are reasonable numbers for compare lands in the world. For example, when you check minimum wage of one place, you have an pre-view on it that is why improvement of a country can understand with economic perspective. To sum up, many people give importance the economical numbers. On the other hand, these indicators are not enough by themselves. Economic process is something; however, it is not everything. Numbers can be manipulate by policymakers. Therefore, we have to focus on other improvements. For instance, increase in health shows much information than economic one. All of the developed world has a better average life-time or less newborn death rate. If a developing country want to be a developed, it should deal with this issues also. Hence, they are also key for. In conclusion, in my view, all types of improvements require to be a successful governments. If a authority want to success, which is main goal of them. Economical improvements should be done and other types ought to follow that.
Progress is vital for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
. If they do not succeed, it would be same as going back.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
progress
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be the main goal; meanwhile, others say there have much vital indicators;
for example
, providing a decent health system for citizens. In that essay, I discuss
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
and medical points and gave my professional opinion.

When subject is process,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
understand it as an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
. Income and consumption numbers
are considered
by national
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
to calculate progress; In fact, these are reasonable numbers for compare lands in the world.
For example
, when you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
minimum wage of one place, you have
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
Possible spelling mistake found.
pre-view
on it
that is
why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
improvement
of a country can understand with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
perspective. To sum up,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
give importance the economical numbers.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, these indicators are not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
by themselves.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Economic
process is something;
however
, it is not everything. Numbers can be
Consider using the past participle "manipulated"?
manipulate
by policymakers.
Therefore
, we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
focus on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
improvements
.
For instance
, increase in health
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
much information than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economic
one.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
developed world has a better average life-time or less newborn death rate. If a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing country
want to be a developed, it should deal with
Did you mean "these"?
this
issues
also
.
Hence
, they are
also
key for.

In conclusion
, in my view, all types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
improvements
require to be a successful
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "government"?
governments
. If
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
authority want to success, which is main goal of them. Economical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
improvements
should
be done
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
types ought to follow that.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Progress is vital for the governments. If they do not succeed, it would be same as going back

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts