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About Pliticians in there area. wirte your opinion

About Pliticians in there area. wirte your opinion Ep5ax

Nowadays, most Political people are coming with new ideas and thoughts. Moreover, they are going with a combination of different people but after completion of their work, they are leaving the people without any courtesy. I totally agree with the given statement. In fact, politicians can do anything when they are in power. if someone wants to come to politics then they need to sever the people which are in their surroundings. Not only the surrounding people they also need to help the people without any hesitation of work. For instance, In their consistency, some groups of kids are facing challenges while they are going to schools due to the roads in their locality. At that moment the leader of the consistency has to take care of their children. On the other hand, They may also make an eye on their officers which are working in their locality on the contrast of few officials were do corruption and to eradicate that the leader of the area has to look at their working places. Unfortunately, if the Political leader is also combined with them they anyone can't do anything. For Example, very less government servents were taking money to do anything from their hand so at that moment legislative party members should work with them to close any files immediately without taking any aspects. But if they both combined and sit on the same nest then anyone can't do anything. In conclusion, To clear all suspects which are happening in the local places there we need a great supervisor.

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people
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ideas
 and thoughts. Moreover
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different
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people
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but
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people
 without any courtesy. I totally
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agree
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given
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if
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come
 to politics then they need to sever the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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only
 the surrounding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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help
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some
 groups of kids are facing challenges while they are going to schools due to the roads in their locality. At that moment the leader of the consistency This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
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On the other hand
, They may also
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make
 an eye on their officers which are working in their locality on the contrast of few officials were Consider using a past participle here: "done".done
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has to
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 combined with them Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'they'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
they anyone
 can't do anything. For Example
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very
 less This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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servents
 were taking money to do anything from their hand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 at that moment legislative party members should work with them to close any files immediately without taking any aspects. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if they both combined and sit on the same nest then anyone can't do anything.

In conclusion
, To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 all suspects which are happening in the local places there we need a great supervisor. 