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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming.

Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. x08Jy
Carbon dioxide and other toxic gases emissions are the main contributors to global warming. This essay will examine the nature impacts and health-related risks which this negative phenomenon poses, as well as solutions to overcome. Environmentalists often right point to biodiversity loss and people’s health as consequences of global warming. Firstly, greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide and methane produced from human-induced activities lead to climate change, which facilitates the loss of bio-diversity. When the overall temperature of the Earth increase, numerous animals’ habitats are being destructed, causing the growth of endangered species. For example, polar bears are on the brink of extinction due to the fast-growing speed of planetary temperature that fostered icecaps melting. Moreover, climate warming also affects people’s well-being. Because of the rise in the sea level caused by global warming, natural disasters such as floods, drought, hurricanes, … are generated, taking away many houses and lives. Despite all aforementioned issues, there are two major solutions to address global warming. First of all, each individual should reduce their carbon footprint. It can be done by mitigating energy consumption, using public transportation systems and lowering the air conditioner are some daily routine actions that a human could change to contribute to the process of lowering climate change. Additionally, the government should introduce laws and taxes to limit emissions from industrial facilities. For instance, Singapore and Canada are the two countries that are able to curb carbon dioxide emissions by introducing taxes on factories and companies, experiencing positive effects on the environment. In conclusion, global warming may result in a loss of biodiversity and many multiple human safety problems. However, this phenomenon can be overcome by reducing the carbon footprint from human’s daily activities and imposing taxes on industrial units.
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dioxide and other toxic gases emissions are the main contributors to
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warming
. This essay will examine the nature impacts and health-related
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Environmentalists
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often
right point to biodiversity loss and
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people
’s health as consequences of
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global
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warming
.
Firstly
, greenhouse gases such as
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carbon
dioxide and methane produced from human-induced activities lead to climate
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change
, which facilitates the loss of bio-diversity. When the
overall
temperature of the Earth increase, numerous animals’ habitats are
being destructed
, causing the growth of endangered species.
For example
, polar bears are on the brink of extinction due to the
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fast
-growing speed of planetary temperature that fostered icecaps melting.
Moreover
, climate
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warming
also
affects
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people
’s well-being.
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Because
of the rise in the sea level caused by
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global
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warming
, natural disasters such as floods, drought, hurricanes, …
are generated
, taking away
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many
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houses
and
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Despite all aforementioned issues, there are two major solutions to address
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.
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First of all
, each individual should
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reduce
their
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carbon
footprint. It can
be done
by mitigating energy consumption, using public transportation systems and lowering the air conditioner are
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some
daily routine actions that a human could
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change
to contribute to the process of lowering climate
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change
.
Additionally
, the
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government
should introduce laws and taxes to limit emissions from industrial facilities.
For instance
, Singapore and Canada are the two countries that are able to curb
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carbon
dioxide emissions by introducing taxes on factories and
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companies
, experiencing
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positive
effects on the environment.

In conclusion
,
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global
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warming
may result in a loss of biodiversity and
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many
multiple human safety problems.
However
, this phenomenon can
be overcome
by reducing the
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carbon
footprint from human’s daily activities and imposing taxes on industrial units.
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IELTS essay Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.5
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