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It's not surprising that BBIA's lipstick is always selling well. From shape, design, quality. Fashionable, luxury lipstick shell design. The color palette is trendy, suitable for all ages, young people just starting to learn about lipstick. Easy to spread, smooth when applying on lips and respecting your skin. Most especially, the price is reasonable and there are often discounts on holidays, give away.
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starting to learn about lipstick. Easy to spread, smooth when applying on lips and respecting your skin. Most
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Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
63 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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