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Talk about the traffic in your country. Show up the method and the problems

Talk about the traffic in your country. Show up the method and the problems 1oYnM

Nowadays, there are many more accidents that happened. Firstly, almost because of the driver's carelessness, mainly in young drivers. It is dangerous if they drive so fast without wear helmets. However, the older drivers are more careful cause they usually drive slow, especially the older people who always attention to the speed limit. Besides, the behaviours don't obey the traffic rules such as: across the red light or park among pavement all punishment of the polices. Another point to consider is the problems about the transportations are glitched also make accidents. Moreover, the roads are narrow

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