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Process recycling of aluminium drinks cans

Process recycling of aluminium drinks cans 52ABP

The given picture illustrates various steps involved in the reprocessing of used aluminum tins. Overall, the cyclic process begins with the collection of used cans at the collection center which is then recycled to produce reusable cans. Firstly, the waste cans are collected in a recycling bin before they are taken to the recycling centers. Later, it is segregated into aluminium and steel at the collection center. These are then transferred to the reprocessing hub in a large vehicle. The process continues in the aluminium manufacturing plant wherein these cans are crushed by machines in the factory. After that, it has been melted down by heating and are converted to aluminum bars after cooling it down. Thereafter it is transformed into large aluminum sheets which in turn remolded make new cans. Finally, these are reused by the soft drink companies for retail and are stacked back in the vending machine for sales.

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cans
 at the collection center which is then recycled to produce reusable cans.

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cans
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 and steel at the collection center. These are then transferred to the reprocessing hub in a large vehicle.

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 manufacturing plant wherein these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are crushed
 by machines in the factory. After that, it has been melted
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 into large aluminum sheets which in turn remolded This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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cans
. Finally
, these are reused
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 for retail and are stacked
 back in the vending machine for sales. 