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Process of ordering food online and the entire business model

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The process demonstrates the stages of buying food via internet. The process consist of 8 staged, firstly, the customer browsing on food Portal according to there needs and quantity of particular food. After that order is placed and finalized successfully. Then the customer need to pay for that food through online mode of transaction. Ordered list is simultaneously recorded to both restaurant purpose as well as to the online store owner. Inbetween the restaurant and online store owner, they is merchant payment as part of the commission. Once the ordered food is getting ready in the restaurant it's directed move on to the merchant. Merchant playe a vital role in this process like bridge between the customer and the owner. At finally food is delivered to the customer via merchant at a particular time
The process demonstrates the stages of buying
food
via internet. The process consist of 8 staged,
firstly
, the
customer
browsing on
food
Portal according to
there
needs and quantity of particular
food
. After that order
is placed
and finalized
successfully
. Then the
customer
need to pay for that
food
through online mode of transaction. Ordered list is
simultaneously
recorded to both restaurant purpose
as well as
to the online store owner.
Inbetween
the restaurant and online store owner, they
is
merchant
payment as part of the commission.
Once
the ordered
food
is getting ready in the restaurant it's directed
move
on to the
merchant
.
Merchant
playe
a vital role in this process like bridge between the
customer
and the owner. At
finally
food
is delivered
to the
customer
via
merchant
at a particular
time
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IELTS essay Process of ordering food online and the entire business model

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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