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The challenges of being a mother

The challenges of being a mother Ykogr

One of the toughest challenges that I had to deal lately was when Goldie suffered from diarrhea, vomiting and fever. Surely, it pained me to see my daughter screaming in agony. I felt apologetic that you had to undergo medical procedure to aid your recovery. My little girl was screaming at the top of her voice in tremendous pain as the nurse pushed an intravenous needle into her tiny arm. What's most painful was when the medical staff conducted a nasal swab for PCR rapid test, I shut my eyes tightly and just held her. If only I could take the pain on her behalf. . .

One of the toughest challenges that I had to deal lately was when Goldie suffered from diarrhea, vomiting and fever.

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 my daughter screaming in agony. I felt apologetic that you had to undergo medical procedure to aid your recovery.

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