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nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home

nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home a7YQG
In these days, people have two choices which purchase food or cook at home. Moreover lots of people prefer buying food rather than cooking. I want to talk about for and against that. The main advantage of that, when you order a meal from out don’t waste your time for cooking. Besides, they will have leasure time to take part in different social and sports activities, and that will surely improve their personality. Moreover every person can’t cook different kinds of foods, therefore after a while they will bored that. On the other hand, purchase food from outside has lots of drawback. Firtsly, cooking at home more healthier than buying from outside. Especially when you cook at home, you consume organic and healthy foods. But many restaurants don't use it because organic food is more expensive than chemicals and lots of people prefer cheap food. Another disadvantages of purchase food is high cost. You pay for different kinds of cost, for example, food or courier fee. At the same time, you do not know how this food is cooked. You have lots of questions about cooking in your mind. For example, what ingredients are used to cook this? Is this organic or chemical food? All thing considered, if you don’t want waste of time you purchase food. Besides you have more time for another job or entertaiment. On the other hand, if you want to have a healthy lifestyle, you should cook at home and use organic and healthy ingredients.
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have two choices which
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purchase
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food
or cook at home.
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Moreover
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lots
of
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people
prefer buying
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food
rather
than cooking. I want to talk about for and against that.

The main advantage of that, when you order a meal from out don’t waste your
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time
for cooking.
Besides
, they will have
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leasure
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time
to
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take part
in
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different
social and sports activities, and that will
surely
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improve
their personality.
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every person can’t cook
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different
kinds of
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foods
,
therefore
after a while they will
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On the other hand
,
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purchase
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food
from outside has
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lots
of drawback.
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Firtsly
, cooking at home
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more healthier
than buying from outside.
Especially
when you cook at home, you consume
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organic
and healthy
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foods
.
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many
restaurants don't
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it
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because
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organic
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food
is more expensive than chemicals and
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lots
of
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people
prefer
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cheap
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food
. Another disadvantages of
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purchase
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food
is high cost. You pay for
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different
kinds of cost,
for example
,
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food
or courier fee. At the same
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time
, you do not know how this
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food
is cooked
. You have
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lots
of questions about cooking in your mind.
For example
, what ingredients are
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used
to cook this? Is this
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organic
or chemical food?

All thing considered, if you don’t want waste of
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time
you
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purchase
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food
.
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Besides
you have more
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time
for another job or
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entertaiment
.
On the other hand
, if you want to have a healthy lifestyle, you should cook at home and
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use
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organic
and healthy ingredients.
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IELTS essay nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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