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Process of making bread by me

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Bread is no longer a strange food for us today. And to make bread, we need to go through many stages. There are 8 main steps in making bread, the process is started by mixing all necessary ingredients and finished by cooling and eating the bread. First, mixing ingredients and make sure they are mixed well. Flour, water and yeast are the important ingredients for the bread. Next, leaving the dough mix just like that for about 30 minutes to make it softer and more flexible. After that, you can kneading that dough by hands or electric mixer for an airy and fluffy bread. Next, the mixture has to go through the fermenation step as yeast consume sugars (glucose) and converts this into energy. While doing this carbon dioxide (CO2) is formed. This is a gas and causes the dough to expand. Once the first fermentation is finished, you can then shaping the dough into whatever shapes you want, this step affect a lot on the final look of the bread. Next, since the bread has been shaped carefully, it is important to help it rise again in orfer not to ruin the shape after baking. After that, scoring your bread, use a sharp thing to do that. By scoring the bread, it has more space to open up when it is put in the oven. Next, your bread should be baked to turn into the most fluffy, deliecious bread. The final stage is to take your bread out of the oven, let them cool and enjoy!
Bread is no longer a strange food for us
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today
. And to
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make
bread, we need to go through
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many
stages. There are 8 main steps in making bread, the process is
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started
by mixing all necessary ingredients and finished by cooling and eating the bread.

First
, mixing ingredients and
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make
sure they
are mixed
well. Flour, water and yeast are the
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important
ingredients for the bread.
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Next
, leaving the
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dough
mix
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just
like that for about 30 minutes to
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make
it softer and more flexible. After that, you can
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kneading
that
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dough
by hands or electric mixer for an airy and fluffy bread.
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Next
, the mixture
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has to
go through the
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fermenation
step as yeast consume sugars (glucose) and converts this into energy.
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While
doing this carbon dioxide (CO2)
is formed
. This is a gas and causes the
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dough
to expand. Once the
first
fermentation
is finished
, you can then shaping the
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dough
into whatever shapes you want, this step affect a lot on the final look of the bread.
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Next
, since the bread has
been shaped
carefully
, it is
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important
to
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help
it rise again in
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orfer
not to ruin the shape after baking. After that, scoring your bread,
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use
a sharp thing to do that. By scoring the bread, it has more space to open up when it
is put
in the oven.
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Next
, your bread should
be baked
to turn into the most fluffy,
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deliecious
bread. The final stage is to take your bread out of the oven,
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let
them cool and enjoy!
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IELTS essay Process of making bread by me

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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