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It is ongoing debate whether city has more amenities or village.

It is ongoing debate whether city has more amenities or village. 5BjWp
Moreover, famous person does not have enough time for their family and persue their hobbies. Furthermore, famous person have to go anywhere with security because of the crowd. Moreover, famous person does not have enough time for their family and persue their hobbies. Furthermore, famous person have to go anywhere with security because of the crowd. Moreover, famous person does not have enough time for their family and persue their hobbies. Furthermore, famous person have to go anywhere with security because of the crowd. Furthermore, promotion is needed for famous people since which retain their prominenty among the masses and thus being a fa
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enough
time for their family and
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persue
their hobbies.
Furthermore
,
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famous
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person
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have to
go anywhere with security
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because
of the crowd.
Moreover
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
does not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time for their family and
Possible spelling mistake found.
persue
their hobbies.
Furthermore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go anywhere with security
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the crowd.
Moreover
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
does not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time for their family and
Possible spelling mistake found.
persue
their hobbies.
Furthermore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go anywhere with security
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the crowd.
Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Furthermore
, promotion
is needed
for
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famous
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people
since which retain their
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prominenty
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IELTS essay It is ongoing debate whether city has more amenities or village.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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