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Process below shows how hydro-electric power generation is generated

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The given images reveals how hydro-electric power is generated with the use of different equipment. Overall, hydro-electric power generation involves 10 main stages beginning with evaporation water and finishing with providing residents areas with electricity. The process of generating hydro-electric power starts when sea water is evaporated as a result of high temperature sun shine. Then, evaporated water drops as a rain to the reservoir. Water which is saved in the reservoir fluxes toward a specific seperating turbine, once a paculiar valve that saves water from fluxing is opened. The turbine seperated the liquid that affluxed two different ways and water is leaxed to pump and power which is taken from water is transmitted high valtage cables. After seperation, pump resent to the reservoir again, while the power comes to a special transformer station through cables, following this step, we come to the final stage of process, transformed power is spreaded by an underground cables among population area including, factories, schools and hospitals.
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images reveals how hydro-electric
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is generated
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Overall
, hydro-electric
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power
generation involves 10 main stages beginning with evaporation
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water
and finishing with providing residents areas with electricity.

The process of generating hydro-electric
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power
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starts
when sea
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water
is evaporated
as a result
of high temperature sun shine. Then, evaporated
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drops as a rain to the reservoir.
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which
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in the reservoir fluxes toward a specific
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seperating
turbine, once a
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paculiar
valve that saves
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water
from fluxing
is opened
. The turbine
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seperated
the liquid that
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affluxed
two
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ways and
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is
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leaxed
to pump and
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which
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from
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is transmitted
high
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valtage
cables. After
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seperation
, pump resent to the reservoir again, while the
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to a special transformer station through cables, following this step, we
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to the final stage of process, transformed
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spreaded
by an underground cables among population area including, factories, schools and hospitals.
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IELTS essay Process below shows how hydro-electric power generation is generated

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