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Process below shows how hydro-electric power generation is generated

Process below shows how hydro-electric power generation is generated Ax8l

the way in which creating a hydro-electric power is revealed by this illustration. Overall, the process includes 12 stages in total, commencing with heating the sea and concluding with making it ready to send to the consumers. Reagarding to the details, the sun heats the sea water in order to evaporate it and taking the form of cloud. when it is raining the water is again stored to the reservoir with a dam that involves a valve to open and close it. after this, it goes to the specific machine which spins a turbine and produces the power, at this point a large amount of power has been transferred to a transformer station. Then it is brought to the local areas where needs power with underground cables. substantially, some of the energy that is made by turbine is utilized to pump the water back lift and will be used again.

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 way in which creating a hydro-electric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
is revealed
 by this illustration.

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, the process includes 12 stages in total, commencing with heating the sea and concluding with making it ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 to the consumers.

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details
, the sun heats the sea water in order to evaporate it and taking the form of cloud. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 it is raining the water is again stored to the reservoir with a dam that involves a valve to open and close it. after this, it goes to the specific machine which spins a turbine and produces the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
, at this point a large amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 has been transferred
 to a transformer station. Then it is brought
 to the local areas where needs You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 with underground cables.

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, If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 energy that is made
 by turbine is utilized
 to pump the water back lift and will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 again. 