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problemss due to internet and the ways to solve them

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The innovation of the internet is one of the major developments that had taken place in past two decades. It has become crucial in our everyday life and made sharing, analysing and consuming data and information easy. However, with this innovation came some problems. In this essay, the problems and solutions associated with information on internet will be discussed. One major drawback is the spread of fake news. Using internet it is easy to share information without authentication. It will result in spread of hoaxes and false information. For example, there had been many cases where the false news about the individual contesting in elections had spread to develop mistrust about the person in the public and sway their decisions. In addition, in these covid times the hoaxes spread about vaccination on social media has created a lot of mistrust among public and problems for government. The another problem is misusing of information available. All kinds of information is present on internet, be it good or bad. This information can be easily used for negative purposes like terrorism, robbery and money laundering. For instance, in a 17 year old in India claimed that he learnt how to make a bomb through internet and posted about it on social media. The same can be the case with terrorists and murderers. To reduce these problems, both the government and individual co-operation is important. The government has to keep in check about what is being uploaded on the internet. It has to develop new security systems through which only authenticated data can be shared. On an individual level every person has to be responsible about what they are sharing and figure out if the information is authenticated before believing it. Moreover, new policies and rules should be made, such as hefty fines and jail time for uploading fake news on internet and for using the information for immoral and wrong purposes. In conclusion, there are problems associated with the information on internet. These problems can be solved by government and individuals if everyone works together and be responsible.
The innovation of the internet is one of the major developments that had taken place in past two decades. It has become crucial in our everyday life and made sharing,
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analysing
and consuming data and
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information
easy.
However
, with this innovation came
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some
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problems
. In this essay, the
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problems
and solutions associated with
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information
on internet will
be discussed
.

One major drawback is the
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spread
of fake
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news
. Using internet it is easy to share
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information
without authentication. It will result in
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spread
of hoaxes and false
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information
.
For example
, there had been
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many
cases where the false
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news
about the
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individual
contesting in elections had
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spread
to develop mistrust about the person in the public and sway their decisions.
In addition
, in these
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covid
times the hoaxes
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spread
about vaccination on social media has created
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a lot of
mistrust among public and
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problems
for
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government
. The another
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problem
is misusing of
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information
available. All kinds of
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information
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is
present on internet, be it
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good
or
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bad
. This
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information
can be
easily
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used
for
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negative
purposes like terrorism, robbery and money laundering.
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, in a
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17 year
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old
in India claimed that he
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learnt
how to
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make
a bomb through internet and posted about it on social media. The same can be the case with terrorists and murderers.

To
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reduce
these
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problems
, both the
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government
and
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individual
co-operation is
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important
. The
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government
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has to
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keep
in
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about what is
being uploaded
on the internet. It
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has to
develop
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new
security systems through which
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only
authenticated data can
be shared
. On an
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individual
level every person
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has to
be responsible about what they are sharing and figure out if the
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information
is authenticated
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before
believing it.
Moreover
,
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new
policies and
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rules
should
be made
, such as hefty fines and jail time for uploading fake
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news
on internet and for using the
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information
for immoral and
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wrong
purposes.

In conclusion
, there are
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problems
associated with the
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information
on internet. These
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problems
can
be solved
by
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government
and
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individuals
if everyone works together and be responsible.
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IELTS essay problemss due to internet and the ways to solve them

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  American English
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345 words
6.0
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