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Problems of speaking foreign language

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The boundary of an individual is not limited to the country they are born in anymore, as the world grows more and more accepting of foriegn workers and immigrants. However, that doesn't mean lvin gin a country as a foreigner comes without hardships, especially when you speak another language that is not the primary language of that country. As someone who has lived a good amount of my life as an immigrant, I have experienced and witnessed many problems that follows when one needs to speak a language that is new to you. Though it may not seem serious, it might even seem petty to some people, the general misunerstanding of everday conversations and interactions can cuse more damage than one might think. It is one thing to get wrong toppings on your pizza, but imagine saying the wrong thing to the police, or not being able to tell the doctor exactly what is wrong with you. This can lead to a series of complicated situations. Another hardhsips that many foreginers face from not being able to speak the language well is having limitations of jobs available to them. One might have been a doctor in their home country but without the ability to speak the new languae fluently, there is no chance that they'll be able to get a job as a doctor. Therefore, many immigrants are working low income jobs which, of ocurse, leads to many problems on social aspects of their lives. All in all, there are many difficulties caused by having to speak a foregin language and not being fluent in it. The issues I have mentioned above are hard to deal with but we have overcome it and many will overcome it in the future. My biggest concern is that not being able to speak the language exposes many people to racism and isolation. This has been a problem for many years and with recent spike of hate crimes against foreginers and immigrants, one can only hope that one day, everyone, whether it be foreigners persons of different color, gener or sexuality, can feel safe and welcome to roam the streets no matter where they are.
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foriegn
workers and
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immigrants
.
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, that doesn't mean
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lvin
gin a
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country
as a foreigner
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comes
without hardships,
especially
when you
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speak
another
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language
that is
not the primary
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language
of that
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country
. As someone who has
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lived
a
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good
amount of my life as an
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immigrant
, I have experienced and witnessed
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many
problems that follows when one needs to
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speak
a
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language
that is
new to you.

Though it may not seem serious, it might even seem petty to
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some
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people
, the general
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misunerstanding
of
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everday
conversations and interactions can
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cuse
more damage than one might
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think
. It is one thing to
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get
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wrong
toppings on your pizza,
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but
imagine saying the
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wrong
thing to the police, or not being
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able
to
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tell
the doctor exactly what is
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wrong
with you. This can lead to a series of complicated situations.

Another
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hardhsips
that
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many
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foreginers
face from not being
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able
to
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speak
the
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language
well is having limitations of jobs available to them. One might have been a doctor in their home
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country
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but
without the ability to
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speak
the new
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languae
fluently
, there is no chance that they'll be
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able
to
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get
a job as a doctor.
Therefore
,
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many
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immigrants
are working low income jobs which, of
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ocurse
, leads to
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many
problems on social aspects of their
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lives
.

All in all, there are
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many
difficulties caused by having to
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speak
a
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foregin
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language
and not being fluent in it. The issues I have mentioned above are
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hard
to deal with
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but
we have overcome it and
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many
will overcome it in the future. My biggest concern is that not being
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able
to
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speak
the
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language
exposes
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many
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people
to racism and isolation. This has been a problem for
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many
years and with recent spike of hate crimes against
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foreginers
and
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immigrants
, one can
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only
hope that one day, everyone, whether it be foreigners persons of
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different
color,
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gener
or sexuality, can feel safe and welcome to roam the streets no matter where they are.
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IELTS essay Problems of speaking foreign language

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
361 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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