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In coming years, people will not buy hard copies of books or newspapers as they can read anything on internet without any cost. I moderately agree with this argument, in some cases, people remain opting for traditional ones

In coming years, people will not buy hard copies of books or newspapers as they can read anything on internet without any cost. I moderately agree with this argument, in some cases, people remain opting for traditional ones kY2aM
In coming years, people will not buy hard copies of books or newspapers as they can read anything on internet without any cost. I moderately agree with this argument, in some cases, people remain opting for traditional ones. This is an undeniable fact that electronic newspapers as well as books bring a wide range of benefits for its reader. Firstly, they are easy to access because we can study everything we want whenever we own a computer or a phone. For instance, while travelling, if a person forgot to bring his book then he can easily read that by searching it online on his electronic device. Secondly, unlike printed books they cost less or even free. Furthermore, digital books or e-news are eco friendly, we do not need to cut down any more trees to make paper for printing which will ultimately help us to combat our prevailing climate issues. On the other hand, a minority of people will still buy printed books or newspapers to quench their reading thirst. Since, they believe spending too much time on screen for reading will affect their health. According to the recent studies, electronic devices can cause major health issues as they emit radiations which is one of the major causes of eyesight weakness. In addition, poor internet connection or a low battery in your cell phone or a laptop can hinder the reading process, that will probably result in feeling a bit of sense of anger. In conclusion, despite having some drawbacks we should give priority to utilize the online newspapers and books on the contrary we should not entirely eliminate the traditional ways.
In coming years,
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people
will not
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buy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
copies of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
as they can read anything on internet without any cost. I
moderately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this argument, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cases,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
remain opting for traditional ones.

This is an undeniable fact that electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
as well
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
bring a wide range of benefits for its reader.
Firstly
, they are easy to access
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
we can study everything we want whenever we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
a computer or a phone.
For instance
, while travelling, if a person forgot to bring his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
then he can
easily
read that by searching it online on his electronic device.
Secondly
, unlike printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
they cost less or even free.
Furthermore
, digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
or e-news are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
eco friendly
, we do not need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down any more trees to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
paper for printing which will
ultimately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us to combat our prevailing climate issues.

On the other hand
, a minority of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will
still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
to quench their reading thirst. Since, they believe spending too much time on screen for reading will affect their health. According to the recent studies, electronic devices can cause major health issues as they emit radiations which is one of the major causes of eyesight weakness.
In addition
, poor internet connection or a low battery in your cell phone or a laptop can hinder the reading process, that will
probably
result in feeling a bit of sense of anger.

In conclusion
, despite having
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
drawbacks we should give priority to utilize the online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
on the contrary
we should not
entirely
eliminate the traditional ways.
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IELTS essay In coming years, people will not buy hard copies of books or newspapers as they can read anything on internet without any cost. I moderately agree with this argument, in some cases, people remain opting for traditional ones

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.5
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