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Problems and Solutions of Transport and Other Aspects of Living in Bangkok

Problems and Solutions of Transport and Other Aspects of Living in Bangkok rGW02
In this world, there are various kinds of transport, depending on where you desire to travel to. For example, if you have a schedule to go to other provinces, they offer different means of transport to select from in order to save time and avoid traffic. Alternatively, you could travel by your personal vehicles. At first, the main reason that causes traffic congestion in Bangkok is people using private transport more than public transport. When Thailand is compared to foreign countries, their public transport is far more reliable, convenient and economical. For example, I used to spend my life in Australia for 1 week. During the time, I saw a few cars on the road, but at the subway, there were plenty of passengers. The reason why Australian people do not use their own cars very often is they can cause too much air pollution, and heavy traffic. While Thai people prefer private transport because of the deep idea of social status and values. Moreover, there are not any quality public transport, such as buses which have given services since World Trade Centre Department did not change their name to Central World, including plenty of construction works or road blocks. As a consequence, Bangkokians encounter the never-ending traffic problem. Even so, students across Thailand move to further their education, graduates seeking job opportunities and various people dreaming to make a fortune in this capital city. It does not matter how terrible pollution, traffic trouble, competing against each other, crime rate and other possible difficulties are, they never stop their dream for a better living and prosperity here at all. I think it is time to solve this problem. There are many possible suggestions. For example, extending the roads and making them parallel, constructing bridges or tunnels at all massive intersections, solving traffic obstruction as urgently as possible. There is another way to decrease the number of cars by increasing car taxes, purchasing a new car by cash only, and making the driver license test more difficult to avoid any dishonest forms of selling a driver license. In conclusion, the traffic congestion problem in Bangkok reflects that the economic prosperity is concentrated in Bangkok and its surrounding areas, and the high and middle class people prefer travelling by their private cars. Solving traffic problems in Bangkok and its vicinity must be connected to the amendment of the country’s development policy to focus on spreading development to other provinces and to develop more for the poor, not just solving the traffic problems. In addition, if still being ineffective, spending even more budgets will be necessary despite causing the remaining budget for other provinces to decrease even more.
In this world, there are various kinds of
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transport
, depending on where you desire to travel to.
For example
, if you have a schedule to go to
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other
provinces, they offer
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different
means of
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transport
to select from in order to save time and avoid
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traffic
.
Alternatively
, you could travel by your personal vehicles.

At
first
, the main reason that causes
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traffic
congestion in Bangkok is
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people
using private
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transport
more than public
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transport
. When Thailand
is compared
to foreign countries, their public
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transport
is far more reliable, convenient and economical.
For example
, I
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used
to spend my life in Australia for 1 week. During the time, I
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saw
a few
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cars
on the road,
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but
at the subway, there were
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plenty
of passengers. The reason why Australian
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people
do not
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use
their
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own
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cars
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very
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often
is they can cause too much air pollution, and heavy
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traffic
. While Thai
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people
prefer private
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transport
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because
of the deep
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idea
of social status and values.
Moreover
, there are not any quality public
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transport
, such as buses which have
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given
services since World Trade
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Centre
Department did not
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change
their name to Central World, including
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plenty
of construction works or road blocks.

As a consequence,
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Bangkokians
encounter the never-ending
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traffic
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problem
. Even
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so
, students across Thailand
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move
to
further
their education, graduates seeking job opportunities and various
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people
dreaming to
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make
a fortune in this capital city. It does not matter how terrible pollution,
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traffic
trouble, competing against each
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other
, crime rate and
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other
possible difficulties are, they never
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stop
their dream for a better living and prosperity here at all. I
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think
it is time to solve this
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problem
. There are
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many
possible suggestions.
For example
, extending the roads and making them parallel, constructing bridges or tunnels at all massive intersections, solving
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traffic
obstruction as
urgently
as possible. There is another way to decrease the number of
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cars
by increasing
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car
taxes, purchasing a new
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car
by cash
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only
, and making the driver license
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test
more difficult to avoid any dishonest forms of selling a driver license.

In conclusion
, the
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traffic
congestion
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problem
in Bangkok reflects that the economic prosperity
is concentrated
in Bangkok and its surrounding areas, and the high and middle
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class
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people
prefer travelling by their private
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cars
. Solving
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traffic
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problems
in Bangkok and its vicinity
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must
be connected
to the amendment of the country’s development policy to focus on spreading development to
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other
provinces and to develop more for the poor, not
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just
solving the
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traffic
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problems
.
In addition
, if
still
being ineffective, spending even more budgets will be necessary despite causing the remaining budget for
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other
provinces to decrease even more.
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IELTS essay Problems and Solutions of Transport and Other Aspects of Living in Bangkok

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
445 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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