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problems and solutions of animals extinction

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In recent decades mankind have had a negative impact on the environments of animals and plants. Some species have extinct and others are in danger of extinction. The development do not always come positive on the environment but rather destructive and horrible on those habitats. In this essay will examine the causes of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problem. The main two causes of mass extinction are pollution and poaching. Pollution have been always the biggest enemy of this planet. It can lead to higher temperature degrees thus impacting some animals natural habitats like the mountains of ice melting and becoming smaller and smaller for animals like penguins and white bears to live in. Or it can be physical pollution like waste that interfere in the animals nature. For example, the plastic waste that affects fish and turtles in the seas. On the other hand, poaching is a huge problem too, especially hunting animals that are in danger of extinction. For instance, hunting rare animals like white tigers and lions. Some possible solution to this problem are regulating laws for countries to minimize polluting the air and recycle waste, and protect animals that are in danger of disappearance. Passing laws in countries to be more friendly towards the environment will be massive step in order to save and make life better for those animals and plants. Moreover, cutting down garbage and start recycling it can lead to improve the lives for animals and humans together. In conclusion, pollution and over hunting will not effect the natural habitats only, It will come and negatively impact our lives as well. Everyone is responsible and people need to help each other to save this beautiful globe.
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impact on the environments of
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animals
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species have extinct
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and others
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but
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destructive and horrible on those habitats. In this essay will examine the causes of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problem.

The main two causes of mass extinction are
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pollution
and poaching.
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Pollution
have been always the biggest enemy of this planet. It can lead to higher temperature degrees
thus
impacting
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some
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animals
natural habitats like the mountains of ice melting and becoming smaller and smaller for
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animals
like penguins and white bears to
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live
in. Or it can be physical
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pollution
like waste that interfere in the
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animals
nature.
For example
, the plastic waste that affects fish and turtles in the seas.
On the other hand
, poaching is a huge problem too,
especially
hunting
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animals
that are in
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danger
of extinction.
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, hunting rare
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animals
like white tigers and lions.

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Some
possible solution to this problem are regulating laws for countries to minimize polluting the air and recycle waste, and protect
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animals
that are in
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danger
of disappearance. Passing laws in countries to be more friendly towards the environment will be massive step in order to save and
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make
life better for those
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animals
and plants.
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, cutting down garbage and
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start
recycling it can lead to
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improve
the
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lives
for
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animals
and humans together.

In conclusion
,
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pollution
and over hunting will not
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the natural habitats
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only
, It will
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come
and
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lives
as well
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people
need to
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help
each other to save this
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beautiful
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IELTS essay problems and solutions of animals extinction

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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