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In some countries, some people think that international tourism brings a bad thing to their country.What are the reasons? How to change these negative attitude?

In some countries, some people think that international tourism brings a bad thing to their country. What are the reasons? How to change these negative attitude? XEAbw
As the world changes every second, our economic, social and political issues are changing over time. Among of these, foreign travelling has had a profound effect on the sociopolitical economy. There is no denying that international tourism has grown exponentially in that today's world. In general, we humans want to explore new things, and this is an inevitable fact. However, tour not only refreshes the mind but also plays an important role for those who want to explore new things. In addition, travel is a major source of income for the country and it is also a reflection of the country's history, including its literature and culture. On the other hand, in some countries, the generality of locals are concerned about tourism, for example, country's natural beauty and culture may be lose by tourism. The first thing I want to say is some natives think that if tourists come to their area, traveller can damage their environment. There were also specific sources of such perceptions. As an evidence, it is about the Bagan Caves in Myanmar that have been inscribed on our World Heritage List. The cultur‌al art of the caves in Bagan is magnificent. Besides, the beauty of Bagan is breathtaking to worldwide tourism. At that time, the number of tourists increased and the cultural artefacts of Bagan may disappear in the minds of some citizens. Nevertheless, to change that perspective, governments should limit the number of foreign visitors. The Board of Trustees should systematically set rules for anyone visiting Bagan. Personally, I strongly believe that doing so will preserve the environment and change the views of local people. Furthermore, it is the responsibility of our citizens to preserve the heritage of our country. As another point, some developed countries such as Australia and Canada have restrictions on international visitors in this age. Moreover, developed countries tend to pay more attention to their own environment and natural disasters than to developing countries. These countries are considered to be polluting the air, water and land if they have dense populations. Although, it is irrefutably true, some locals are extremely negative. In order to change such attitudes, tourists should be allowed to enter the country with limited stipulations, and sightseer should be able to understand the geography of the country they are visiting and it is also important to study the local culture in advance. In conclusion, everyone deserves to enjoy the natural beauty. Today, however, travel bloggers have sprung up to cover their country. At Last, we need to find out why the locals have a negative view of tourists and change their view before we travel to another country.
As the world
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changes
every second, our economic, social and political issues are changing over time. Among of these, foreign travelling has had a profound effect on the sociopolitical economy. There is no denying that international
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tourism
has grown
exponentially
in that
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today
's world.
In general
, we humans want to explore new things, and this is an inevitable fact.
However
, tour not
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only
refreshes the mind
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but
also
plays an
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important
role for those who want to explore new things.
In addition
, travel is a major source of income for the
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country
and it is
also
a reflection of the country's history, including its literature and culture.
On the other hand
, in
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some
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countries
, the generality of
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locals
are concerned
about
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tourism
,
for example
, country's natural beauty and culture may be
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lose
by
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tourism
. The
first
thing I want to say is
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some
natives
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think
that if
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tourists
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come
to their area,
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traveller
can damage their environment. There were
also
specific sources of such perceptions. As an evidence, it is about the
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Bagan
Caves in Myanmar that have
been inscribed
on our World Heritage List. The
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cultur
‌
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al
art of the caves in
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Bagan
is magnificent.
Besides
, the beauty of
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Bagan
is breathtaking to worldwide
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tourism
. At that time, the number of
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tourists
increased and the cultural
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artefacts
of
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Bagan
may disappear in the minds of
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some
citizens.
Nevertheless
, to
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change
that perspective,
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governments
should limit the number of foreign visitors. The Board of Trustees should
systematically
set
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rules
for anyone visiting
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Bagan
.
Personally
, I
strongly
believe that doing
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so
will preserve the environment and
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change
the views of
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local
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people
.
Furthermore
, it is the responsibility of our citizens to preserve the heritage of our
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country
. As another point,
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some
developed
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countries
such as Australia and Canada have restrictions on international visitors in this age.
Moreover
, developed
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countries
tend to pay more attention to their
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own
environment and natural disasters than to developing
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countries
. These
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countries
are considered
to be polluting the air, water and land if they have dense populations. Although, it is
irrefutably
true,
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some
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locals
are
extremely
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negative
. In order to
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change
such attitudes,
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tourists
should be
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allowed
to enter the
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country
with limited stipulations, and sightseer should be able to understand the geography of the
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country
they are visiting and it is
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to study the
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local
culture in advance.
In conclusion
, everyone deserves to enjoy the natural beauty.
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Today
,
however
, travel bloggers have sprung up to cover their
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country
. At Last, we need to find out why the
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locals
have a
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negative
view of
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tourists
and
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change
their view
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before
we travel to another
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country
.
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IELTS essay In some countries, some people think that international tourism brings a bad thing to their country. What are the reasons? How to change these negative attitude?

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