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private vehicles are increasing but on the other hand use of public transport is best source as far as transportation is concerned. Governments should spend more money on railways and comparatively low on roads. This essay will argue that why I totally agree with the statement.

private vehicles are increasing but on the other hand use of public transport is best source as far as transportation is concerned. Governments should spend more money on railways and comparatively low on roads. This essay will argue that why I totally agree with the statement. m8OVn

Nowadays private vehicles are increasing but on the other hand use of public transport is best source as far as transportation is concerned. Governments should spend more money on railways and comparatively low on roads. This essay will argue that why I totally agree with the statement. To commence with, pollution is one of the major issue caused by private vehicles which are roadways such as bikes and cars whereas trains or railways being public vehicle can carry hundreds of people and as compare to roadways there will be less population. For instance, in Delhi there was a report that 86% of pollution is due to roadways. So alternative method is that government should expend more money make expand railway system in every city. Furthermore, railways will have more advantages than roadways. Also, metropolitan cities would have limited traffic and it would be because there will be less roadways. To think about future, if these railways are spent more amount of money they will be automated and will have less chances of accidents as root cause of accidents is due to human error. For example, metro trains are more relaxing, convenient, cheap and safe for a traveler. Overall, people would be benefited more if railway systems are expanded. In conclusion, as government thinks about pros and cons of a particular thing and then it takes an action therefore in this case their is inclination towards railways. As it provides safety and there is no harm to air quality so it should be given priority.

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but
on the other hand
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use
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Governments
 should spend more money on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 and comparatively
 low on roads. This essay will argue that why I totally
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agree
 with the statement.

To commence with, pollution is one of the major issue caused by private vehicles which are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlaneboulevardthoroughfarerouteviaductparking lot
roadways
 such as bikes and cars whereas trains or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 being public vehicle can carry hundreds of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and as compare to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlaneboulevardthoroughfarerouteviaductparking lot
roadways
 there will be less population. For instance
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roadways
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 alternative method is that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should expend more money This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 expand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railway
 system in every city.

Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 will have more advantages than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlaneboulevardthoroughfarerouteviaductparking lot
roadways
. Also
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because
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less
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roadways
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about future, if these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
are spent
 more amount of money they will be automated
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less
 chances of accidents as root cause of accidents is due to human error. For example
, metro trains are more relaxing, convenient, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 and safe for a traveler. Overall
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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railway
 systems are expanded
.

In conclusion
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government
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thinks
 about pros and cons of a particular thing and then it takes an action therefore
in this case
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their
 is inclination towards You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
. As it provides safety and there is no harm to air quality This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 priority. 