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"It is better to have a low-paid job that you enjoy than a well-paid job that you hate." How much do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

"It is better to have a low-paid job that you enjoy than a well-paid job that you hate. " How much with this opinion? 5kqKN
Some people choose high paying jobs. Others prefer jobs they find satisfying even if the salary is low. While I admit that it is important to earn enough to make a living, in my opinion, job satisfaction is more important than the size of the pay package. Job satisfaction increases productivity. If people like their jobs, no one has to force them to go to work. No one has to supervise them. They will perform their job on their own and with utmost interest and concentration. This interest that they show will automatically improve the results and help them achieve more in less time. By contrast, people who choose a particular job just because it is paying well will find it rather difficult to stay motivated. They have to push themselves to work every morning. Because of this lack of interest in the job, they make more errors and take longer to finish tasks. As a result, they have to stay late at office. The long working hours will eventually affect their health and family life. Take, for instance, the case of IT professionals. The IT industry pays well but the jobs are extremely stressful and demanding. Someone who chooses a job in this industry just because the salaries are good will eventually burn out unable to cope with the pressures of the jobOn the flip side, rewarding jobs may not always pay well at the beginning. But over time, the worker’s enthusiasm and dedication will make the job a lucrative career option. For example, there are lots of people who turned their hobbies into successful career options. It was their love for the job that ultimately helped them. To conclude, job satisfaction is certainly more important than the money earned. If people love their job, eventually, they will also earn well.
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will find it
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push themselves to work every morning.
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more errors and take longer to finish tasks.
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stay late at office. The long working hours will
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for instance
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in this industry
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may not always pay
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at the beginning.
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over time, the worker’s enthusiasm and dedication will
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the
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a lucrative career option.
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who turned their hobbies into successful career options. It was their
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for the
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than the money earned. If
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their
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,
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IELTS essay "It is better to have a low-paid job that you enjoy than a well-paid job that you hate. " How much with this opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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