Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Which animals make the best pets?

Which animals make the best pets? q1KnD
The animal was living in the area, where a place far from human societies. Still, humans have used these animals to help their work or even pet them to protect their owners. When they were using them for a long time, humans will think that their animal is part of the family. Dogs are a great example of why this animal is the best pet. The dogs are the animal, that has more royalty with humans more than other animals. They are active and ready for their owners all the time, which makes dogs bring us joy, companionship, and be a part of the family as the best buddy. Despite dogs being friendly animals, but they might do something dangerous because of their instinct, for instance, they will protect their area from an intruder by threatening and barking it out loud. So make sure that your dog is properly trained because the responsibility of every dog owner to take all of the problems. In conclusion, dogs are still one of the best animals for a pet, they are active, royal, and make the owners happy.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
was living in the area, where a place far from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
societies.
Still
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
their work or even pet them to protect their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owners
. When they were using them for a long time,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
is part of the family.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Dogs
are a great example of why this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
is the best pet.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dogs
are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
, that has more royalty with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
more than other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
. They are active and ready for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owners
all the time, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dogs
bring us joy, companionship, and be a part of the family as the best buddy.

Despite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dogs
being friendly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they might do something
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of their instinct,
for instance
, they will protect their area from an intruder by threatening and barking it out loud.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
is
properly
trained
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the responsibility of every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owner
to take
Consider using "all the".
all of the
problems.

In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dogs
are
still
one of the best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
for a pet, they are active, royal, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owners
happy.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Which animals make the best pets?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts