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Fashion is more and more developed by the increasing shopping needs of people. Some people say that prices in stores should be lower because before young people start working, they depend on their parents' money and after starting to earn money they have to save for other things. However, some people feel it's normal to spend a lot of money to buy more valuable and unique items that few people have. Fashion designers also have to put in a lot of work to design an outfit with their style, so they think the amount of money people spend to buy those items is suitable.
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IELTS essay prices in stores should be lower

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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