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Nowadays, both of them are intended to reduce the use of product packaging in order to save the nature from the a reusable material from the left over product packaging.

Nowadays, both of them are intended to reduce the use of product packaging in order to save the nature from the a reusable material from the left over product packaging. 9Bk8W
21'st century have a lot of policy that made by a government or institutional forces to made human realize about the importance of nature. One of this policy affected the supermarkets and manufactures to how they sell their products. Nowadays, both of them are intended to reduce the use of product packaging in order to save the nature from the a reusable material from the left over product packaging. The consumer usually thrown away their product packaging it is because what they need is the product inside the packaging. This unused product packaging become a trash and become a treat of the environment. If the product packaging are not able to be recycle or reuse, it can be poisoned the cell and the water if there is no solution about it. The Plastic become the hardest material to decompose into the earth it takes more than a hundred years for that. Unfortunately a lot of product packaging that use by the supermarkets and manufacturers made from a plastic material. Others having an another argument about this issue. The consumer is the one who have a responsibility to this issue. They need to avoid for buying a product with a lot of packaging. Otherwise, this argument are not strong enough to highlight the consumer as the responsible one. It is because consumer only care for the product they have bought. They does not care about what kind of packaging that use to protect the product.
21'st century have
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a lot of
policy that made by a
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government
or institutional forces to made human realize about the importance of nature. One of this policy
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affected
the supermarkets and manufactures to how they sell their
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products
. Nowadays, both of them
are intended
to
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reduce
the
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use
of
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product
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packaging
in order to save the nature from
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the a
reusable material from the
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left
over
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product
packaging.

The
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consumer
usually
thrown away their
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product
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packaging
it is
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because
what they need is the
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product
inside the
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packaging
. This unused
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product
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packaging
become a trash and become a treat of the environment. If the
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product
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packaging
are not able to be
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recycle
or reuse, it can
be poisoned
the cell and the water if there is no solution about it. The Plastic become the hardest material to decompose into the earth it takes more than a hundred years for that. Unfortunately
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a lot of
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product
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packaging
that
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use
by the supermarkets and manufacturers made from a plastic material.

Others having
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an another argument
about this issue. The
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consumer
is the one who have a responsibility to this issue. They need to avoid for buying a
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product
with
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a lot of
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packaging
.
Otherwise
, this argument are not strong
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enough
to highlight the
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consumer
as the responsible one. It is
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because
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consumer
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only
care for the
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product
they have
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bought
. They
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does
not care about what kind of
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packaging
that
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use to
protect the
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product
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, both of them are intended to reduce the use of product packaging in order to save the nature from the a reusable material from the left over product packaging.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
244 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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