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Almost half the world’s population now lives in urban areas and, as cities grow even larger, conditions for city dwellers are likely to get worse. Two of the most critical problems are pollution and crime. Air pollution has become worse due to increasing emissions from vehicles and factories and this is a major health problem for people who live in cities. Graffiti, vandalism and assaults are among the crimes which are rising in many cities. However, there are several ways in which both of these problems can be reduced. There are a number of steps that could be taken to reduce pollution in urban areas. Firstly, governments could increase the tax on cars and petrol to discourage people from driving. They could also subsidise public transport to make it cheaper and encourage more people to use trains and buses. This would reduce carbon dioxide emissions caused by cars and would also make commuting more efficient. Another way of reducing pollution would be to introduce stricter anti-pollution laws to make factories responsible for the environment. The government could impose heavy fines on companies that break these laws. The urban crime rate could be reduced in a number of ways. For example, providing better entertainment facilities for young people would reduce graffiti and other types of vandalism because boredom is one of the reasons for these types of crimes. Installing surveillance cameras in public areas would be another positive step because it would deter people from vandalizing public property. It would also make it easier for police to catch vandals. More police at night would also help reduce alcohol-related crimes such as assault. To sum up, although pollution and crime are likely to become worse as cities continue to grow, there are many things that can be done to reduce these problems.
Almost half the world’s population
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now
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lives
in urban areas and, as
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cities
grow even larger, conditions for city dwellers are likely to
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get
worse. Two of the most critical
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problems
are
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pollution
and
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crime
. Air
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pollution
has become worse due to increasing emissions from vehicles and factories and this is a major health
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problem
for
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people
who
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live
in
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cities
. Graffiti, vandalism and assaults are among the
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crimes
which are rising in
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many
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cities
.
However
, there are several ways in which both of these
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problems
can be
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reduced
.

There are a number of steps that could
be taken
to
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reduce
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pollution
in urban areas.
Firstly
,
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governments
could increase the tax on cars and petrol to discourage
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people
from driving. They could
also
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subsidise
public transport to
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make
it cheaper and encourage more
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people
to
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use
trains and buses. This would
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reduce
carbon dioxide emissions caused by cars and would
also
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make
commuting more efficient. Another way of reducing
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pollution
would be to introduce stricter anti-pollution laws to
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make
factories responsible for the environment. The
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government
could impose heavy fines on
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companies
that break these laws.

The urban
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crime
rate could be
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reduced
in a number of ways.
For example
, providing better entertainment facilities for young
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people
would
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reduce
graffiti and other types of vandalism
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because
boredom is one of the reasons for these types of
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crimes
. Installing surveillance cameras in public areas would be another
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positive
step
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because
it would deter
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people
from vandalizing public property. It would
also
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make
it easier for police to catch vandals. More police at night would
also
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help
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reduce
alcohol-related
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crimes
such as assault.

To sum up, although
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pollution
and
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crime
are likely to become worse as
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cities
continue to grow, there are
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many
things that can
be done
to
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reduce
these
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problems
.
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IELTS essay present the solution to a problem

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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