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Nowadays traffic jam is becoming more and more popular in the world. What are the causes of this and what solutions should be suggested for this situation?

Nowadays traffic jam is becoming more and more popular in the world. What are the causes of this and what solutions should be suggested for this situation? dpbk6
The issue of traffic jams in the world has aroused people’s discussion. Recently, more and more people get stressed with this situation, as they have to spend hours after hours in the street and lose their productivity and valuable time. Numerous negative effects have arisen as a result of this and societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems. For a number of reasons, traffic has become the main problem of many cities and towns all over the world. Firstly, as the population growth in many metropolis cities such as in Shanghai, New York, Dhaka and Bangkok has increased rapidly in the past recent years, it means that there are more cars in the city. Secondly, in some cities, public transportation facilities are poorly managed therefore the people choose to drive their own vehicles. For example, there are no subway systems in my hometown, Hanoi, and the bus system is inconvenient and inefficient. Lastly, in many countries such as Vietnam or China, the economic development is not widespread, and as a result a lot of people from rural areas move to cities which would create traffic related problems. Many people are buying private cars and it is not unusual that many families own more than one car. These two reasons with the poor traffic management system in many cities cause unmanageable traffic jams nowadays. The problem of traffic has several effects on people and the city. The most significant effect is increased anger and frustration. Every day, people experience a delay in reaching their workplaces or universities. This leads to high tension and stress among them. Another feasible effect worth mentioning here is the environmental effect. The quality of air declines because of the exhaust fumes generated by cars which may result in severe health problems such as asthma, bronchitis and heart attacks. The waste of time on average is huge and this is another major drawback the bad traffic is causing. In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for traffic problems these days. It is mainly due to the population growth, density and poor public transportation facilities. The government and public should cooperate to reduce the number of vehicles by improving the public transports, developing new areas and persuading its residents to use bicycles.
The issue of
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traffic
jams in the world has aroused
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people’s
discussion. Recently, more and more
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people
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get
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stressed
with this situation, as they
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have to
spend hours after hours in the street and lose their productivity and valuable time. Numerous
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negative
effects have arisen
as a result
of this and societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

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traffic
has become the main
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problem
of
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many
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cities
and towns all over the world.
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, as the population growth in
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metropolis
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cities
such as in Shanghai, New York, Dhaka and Bangkok has increased
rapidly
in the past recent years, it means that there are more
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cars
in the city.
Secondly
, in
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some
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cities
,
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public
transportation facilities are
poorly
managed
therefore
the
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people
choose to drive their
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own
vehicles.
For example
, there are no subway systems in my hometown, Hanoi, and the bus system is inconvenient and inefficient.
Lastly
, in
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many
countries such as Vietnam or China, the economic development is not widespread, and
as a result
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a lot of
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people
from rural areas
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move
to
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cities
which would create
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traffic
related
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problems
.
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Many
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people
are buying private
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cars
and it is not unusual that
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many
families
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own
more than one
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car
. These two reasons with the poor
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traffic
management system in
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many
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cities
cause unmanageable
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traffic
jams nowadays.

The
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problem
of
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traffic
has several effects on
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people
and the city. The most significant
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effect
is increased
anger and frustration. Every day,
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people
experience a delay in reaching their workplaces or universities. This leads to high tension and
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stress
among them. Another feasible
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effect
worth mentioning here is the environmental
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effect
. The quality of air declines
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because
of the exhaust fumes generated by
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cars
which may result in severe health
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problems
such as asthma, bronchitis and heart attacks. The waste of time on average is huge and this is another major drawback the
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bad
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traffic
is causing.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that there are various reasons for
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traffic
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problems
these days. It is
mainly
due to the population growth, density and poor
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public
transportation facilities. The
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government
and
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public
should cooperate to
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reduce
the number of vehicles by improving the
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public
transports, developing new areas and persuading its residents to
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use
bicycles.
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IELTS essay Nowadays traffic jam is becoming more and more popular in the world. What are the causes of this and what solutions should be suggested for this situation?

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379 words
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