Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Last year, my family and I had a trip went to beach in Cua Lo.

Last year, my family and I had a trip went to beach in Cua Lo. 2xOlo

Last year, my family and I had a trip went to beach in Cua Lo. This trip had 2 days and a night. We were experienced many things in Cua Lo. In the morning, we got up early and saw sunrise together. We went for a walk along the beach and took photos. Then we went swimming and sailing. After that, we came back to the hotel and had breakfast. At noon, it became hot and sunny. Also, we were quite tired, so we stayed at the hotel and relaxed. In the afternoon, when it was cooler and windy, we went to the beach again and played some games which were organized there. When sunset, we came back the hotel and had dinner. We ate many kinds of sea food. They were very delicious. In the evening, it was cool and had light wind. We walked along the beach and enjoyed clean air. Of course, we didn’t forget to buy many souvenirs for my relations and my friends, such as bracelet or some things made from shell, …I had a special time with my family there. I could learn many things from this trip and know more about this place. It’s a beautiful place and the people there are very nice. I hope I can come here again.

Last year, my family and I had a trip You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 in Possible spelling mistake found.CUACutCupCIACubaCue
Cua
 Lo. This trip had 2 days and a night. We were experienced
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things in Possible spelling mistake found.CUACutCupCIACubaCue
Cua
 Lo. In the morning, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 up early and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 sunrise together. We You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 for a walk along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 and took photos. Then we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 swimming and sailing. After that, we came back to the hotel and had breakfast. At noon, it became hot and sunny. Also
, we were quite tired, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we stayed at the hotel and relaxed. In the afternoon, when it was cooler and windy, we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 again and played This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 games which were organized
 there. When sunset, we came back the hotel and had dinner. We ate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 kinds of sea food. They were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 delicious. In the evening, it was cool and had light wind. We walked along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 and enjoyed clean air. Of course
, we didn’t forget to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 souvenirs for my relations and my friends, such as bracelet or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 things made from shell, …Add a space between sentences I
I
 had a special time with my family there. I could learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things from this trip and know more about this place. It’s a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 place and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nice. I hope I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 here again. 