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My ideal home would be a villa by the sea

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My ideal home would be a villa by the sea. It would be better to have a garden with some flowers and a vegetable patch in front of the villa. In the backyard, I would build a swimming pool with sea view. My villa would have two-floor: the living room next to the kitchen, three bedrooms, two bathrooms and some other rooms, … It to be painted light yellow which makes me feel comfortable when every times I come home. In addition, my villa would be equipped the household appliances such as microwave oven, fridge, dishwasher, …. because I’m too lazy to do the housework. It to be painted light yellow which makes me feel comfortable when every times I come home.
My ideal home would be a villa by the sea. It would be better to have a garden with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
flowers and a vegetable patch in front of the villa. In the backyard, I would build a swimming pool with sea view. My villa would have two-floor: the living room
next
to the kitchen, three bedrooms, two bathrooms and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other rooms, … It to
be painted
light yellow which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me feel comfortable when every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "time"?
times
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
home.
In addition
, my villa would
be equipped
the household appliances such as microwave oven, fridge, dishwasher, ….
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because
I’m too lazy to do the housework. It to
be painted
light yellow which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me feel comfortable when every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "time"?
times
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
home.

IELTS essay My ideal home would be a villa by the sea

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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