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Present like a mini-essay in task 2 -advantages and disadvantages:

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In what ways have these developments changed society for the better and for the worse- One general sentence introduces the better and the worse by paraphrasing the question. - Some main ideas with topic sentences and supporting sentences or examples - One sentence in conclusion to summarize or to express your opinion. Some Advantages of Technology • To help somebody to keep in touch with friends and family: to maintain communication with someone Example: The availability of advanced technology helps people to keep in touch with their friends and family who travel abroad. • To make Education accessible to countryside students: give countryside students the chance to study Example: Equipping remote schools with more computers could make Education accessible to the countryside students. Some Disadvantages of Technology • To lack social skills: someone who has poor communications skills and it is difficult for them to interact with people effectively Example: Children who spend too much time in front of computer screens will lack social skills. • To face health problems: to have a lot of physical ailments Example: Individuals using smart phones too much time might face some health problems related to eyes.

In what ways have these developments This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 society for the better and for the worse-	One general You use this word too often, consider replacing it withedicttermdecisioncensureorderpenalty
sentence
 introduces the better and the worse by paraphrasing the question.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.—
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This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 main This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 with topic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withedicttermdecisioncensureorderpenalty
sentences
 and supporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withedicttermdecisioncensureorderpenalty
sentences
 or examples

Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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	One You use this word too often, consider replacing it withedicttermdecisioncensureorderpenalty
sentence
in conclusion
to summarize
 or to express your opinion.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 Advantages of Technology

•	To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 somebody to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch with friends and family: to maintain communication with someone

The pronoun 'someone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "examples", "exampled".ExamplesExampled
Example
: The availability of advanced technology This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch with their friends and family who travel abroad.

•	To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 Education accessible to countryside students: give countryside students the chance to study

Example: Equipping remote schools with more computers could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 Education accessible to the countryside students.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 Disadvantages of Technology

•	To lack social This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
: someone who has poor communications This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and it is difficult for them to interact with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
effectively


Example: Children who spend too much time in front of computer screens will lack social This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
.

•	To face health problems: to have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 physical ailments

Example: Individuals using smart phones too much time might face This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 health problems related to eyes. 