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Present like a mini-essay in task 2 -advantages and disadvantages:

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In what ways have these developments changed society for the better and for the worse- One general sentence introduces the better and the worse by paraphrasing the question. - Some main ideas with topic sentences and supporting sentences or examples - One sentence in conclusion to summarize or to express your opinion. Some Advantages of Technology • To help somebody to keep in touch with friends and family: to maintain communication with someone Example: The availability of advanced technology helps people to keep in touch with their friends and family who travel abroad. • To make Education accessible to countryside students: give countryside students the chance to study Example: Equipping remote schools with more computers could make Education accessible to the countryside students. Some Disadvantages of Technology • To lack social skills: someone who has poor communications skills and it is difficult for them to interact with people effectively Example: Children who spend too much time in front of computer screens will lack social skills. • To face health problems: to have a lot of physical ailments Example: Individuals using smart phones too much time might face some health problems related to eyes.
In what ways have these developments
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society for the better and for the worse- One general
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in conclusion
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Advantages of Technology

• To
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somebody to
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in touch with friends and family: to maintain communication with someone

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: The availability of advanced technology
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helps
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in touch with their friends and family who travel abroad.

• To
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Education accessible to countryside students: give countryside students the chance to study

Example: Equipping remote schools with more computers could
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Education accessible to the countryside students.

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Disadvantages of Technology

• To lack social
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: someone who has poor communications
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and it is difficult for them to interact with
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effectively


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• To face health problems: to have
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health problems related to eyes.
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IELTS essay Present like a mini-essay in task 2 -advantages and disadvantages:

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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