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Doing two or more activities at the same time

Doing two or more activities at the same time a7ajw
In moments like this, I remember how difficult is to watch a movie while doing something else. Writing a text, for instance. Where I live they say: Men are unable to do two tasks at the same time. Normally it is said by women who hate men, but I think there is a little of truth in that affirmation, at least in my case. My case is, however, more dramatic than that. Be ready to dry the tears from your cheeks, I warned you. . . Always when I beginn a movie that lasts two hours, for example, I need six hours to watch it entirely. Are you already crying? I knew. . . Not a very efficient activity, I know, but some day (or someday? ) someone will marry me and will have to lead with it. That person will neither know it in the moment when she knows me, nor during the next few years after that. Only when she marries me and has no choice. It's, of course, a joke. I didn't know what I could write about, so I came up with this mixture of foolishnees. Bli bli bli. Bla, bla, bla. I'm surprised about the fact that I'm writing in English. I thought that they were not teaching anything useful at school (and currently I'm not able to say a single word in English without a pitiful accent), but here I am, writing in English. It would be funny if it weren't for the fact that it is not funny.
In moments like this, I remember how difficult is to
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watch
a movie while doing something else. Writing a text,
for instance
.

Where I
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live
they say:
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Men
are unable to do two tasks at the same time.
Normally
it
is said
by women who hate
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men
,
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but
I
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think
there is a
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little
of truth in that affirmation, at least in my case.

My case is,
however
, more dramatic than that. Be ready to dry the tears from your cheeks, I warned you.
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.
Don't put a space before the full stop
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The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Always
when I
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beginn
a movie that lasts two hours,
for example
, I need six hours to
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watch
it
entirely
. Are you already crying? I knew.
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Don't put a space before the full stop
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Not a
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very
efficient activity, I
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know
,
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but
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some
day (or someday?
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)
someone will marry me and will
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have to
lead with it. That person will neither
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know
it
Did you mean "at the moment" (=currently)?
in the moment
when she
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knows
me, nor during the
next
few years after that.
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Only
when she marries me and has no choice.

It's,
of course
, a joke. I didn't
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know
what I could write about,
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so
I came up with this mixture of
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foolishnees
.

Bli
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bli bli
.
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Bla
,
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bla
,
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bla
. I'm surprised about the fact that I'm writing in English. I
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thought
that they were not teaching anything useful at school (and
currently
I'm not able to say a single word in English without a pitiful accent),
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but
here I am, writing in English. It would be
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funny
if it weren't for the fact that it is not
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funny
.
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IELTS essay Doing two or more activities at the same time

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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