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The two picture represent difference of the public part between 1920 and now.

The two picture represent difference of the public part between 1920 and now. 9Bdgw

Overall, named by Grange park has changed considerably from the beginning which means except position of some Rose Garden and entrance. In this essay will gives you general details of that change in three sites such as western middle and east side. For the western side therefore seats on the corner and stage 4 musician musician turned into a ampitheatre for concert. Moreover, there had two rose gardens, never tells, it only 1, that is locating east South of the garden. For the center of the garden, as mentioned above the declined Rose Garden has transformed to the middle site surrounded by four seats. Furthermore top and bottom of the site of entrance show no distinctions. For the eastern side, another Rose Garden was modified into café. So on, the seat, located on the east bottom, had altered too water feature, and at this land, the underground carpark is added. In addition, the pond for water plants now maintaining for kids, in other words, opted to play children play area.

Overall
, named by Grange park has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
considerably
 from the beginning which means except position of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
Rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
 and entrance. In this essay will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "give"give
gives
 you general This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in three sites such as western middle and east side.

For the western side therefore
 seats on the corner and stage 4 Possible typo: you repeated a wordmusician
musician musician
 turned into Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
Possible spelling mistake found.amphitheater
ampitheatre
 for concert. Moreover
, there had two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
gardens
, never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informs
tells
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 1, that is
 locating east South of the garden.

For the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
, as mentioned above the declined You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
Rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
 has transformed to the middle site surrounded by four seats. Furthermore
 top and bottom of the site of entrance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 no distinctions.

For the eastern side, another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
Rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
was modified
 into café. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 on, the seat, located on the east bottom, had altered Did you mean "to water"?to water
too water
 feature, and at this land, the underground Possible spelling mistake found.car parkcarp ark
carpark
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. In addition
, the pond for water plants This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 maintaining for kids, in other words
, opted to play children play area. 