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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

"Career" is one the most spoken and trending word in today's competitive market. Some people are focussing only on single career, which are now considered as old fashioned, by majority of the world. Most of the youngsters now has started shifting towards multiple career options and understood the importance of continous education. This essay will talk about the the views of having single and multiple oriented career options along with the thirst of having continous edcation throughout their journey. The idea of having a single career oriented option is becoming obselete, in this modern era. The world is growing rapidly in terms of population and existing human resources can be replaced by new, skillfull and young talents. For instance, India is one of the largest populated country and as per recent study, it has the most intellectual youths in abundance, who can easily replace the old fashioned, traditional employees. Having multiple career oriented options, not only boost the confidence of individuals but also create a path to earn money in diversified ways. The new fashioned career options will be possible, only if people are educating themselves on a regular basis. For example, a recent economical survey stated that software companies are spending lot of money in cross skilling their employees in multiple technologies. This will result in a win-win situation for both the employess and organisations. In my opinion, having multiple career goals and diversifed ways of earning money will be the new normal approach in this era of human excellence. This will be achieved only by continous education and regular upskilling. This essay has thrown some lights on the advantages of the having multiple career options and how continous education will improve ones career. Also, this essay has stated how old fashioned, single career option has become nowadays and why people are not opting this approach. "Survival of the fittest " is best suited for today's competive world and one who fits enough in various career options will be the ones who survive in this fiercely competitive world.
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today
's competitive market.
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people
are focussing
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only
on
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single
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career
, which are
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now
considered as
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old
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fashioned
, by majority of the
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world
. Most of the youngsters
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now
has
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started
shifting towards
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multiple
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career
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options
and understood the importance of
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continous
education. This essay will talk about
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the the
views of
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having
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single
and
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multiple
oriented
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career
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options
along with the thirst of
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having
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continous
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edcation
throughout their journey.

The
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idea
of
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having
a
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single
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career
oriented
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option
is becoming
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obselete
, in this modern era. The
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world
is growing
rapidly
in terms of population and existing human resources can
be replaced
by new,
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skillfull
and young talents.
For instance
, India is one of the largest populated country and as per recent study, it has the most intellectual youths in abundance, who can
easily
replace the
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old
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fashioned
, traditional employees.
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Having
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multiple
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career
oriented
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options
, not
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only
boost the confidence of individuals
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but
also
create a path to earn money in diversified ways. The new
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fashioned
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career
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options
will be possible,
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only
if
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people
are educating themselves on a regular basis.
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, a recent economical survey stated that software
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companies
are spending
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lot of
money in cross
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skilling
their employees in
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multiple
technologies. This will result in a win-win situation for both the
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employess
and
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organisations
.

In my opinion,
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having
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multiple
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career
goals and
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diversifed
ways of earning money will be the new normal approach in this era of human excellence. This will
be achieved
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only
by
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continous
education and regular upskilling.

This essay has thrown
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some
lights on the advantages of the
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having
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multiple
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career
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options
and how
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continous
education will
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improve
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ones
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career
.
Also
, this essay has stated how
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old
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fashioned
,
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single
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career
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option
has become nowadays and why
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people
are not opting this approach.
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Survival of the fittest
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is best suited for
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today
's
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competive
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world
and one who fits
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enough
in various
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career
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options
will be the
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ones
who survive in this
fiercely
competitive
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world
.
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IELTS essay Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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