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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

People are the main reason is destroying and harming the environment. To address these issue government should force campaigns as well as population use renewable energy from solar or wind. A single person may effect to nature either good or bad way. As technology has developed, people are more tend to use wrapped products which produces more rubbish. Clearly overpopulation has already become on of the global problem and that means urban areas replacing suburban areas place. At the same of destroying forest big numbers of animals becoming easily victims. To tackle the issue, government should attract people interest and involve them by moraphony and festivals which aimed planting and nourishing animals. In Addition, having strict lows would be the best solution too. Government must to force companies use renewable energy from solar, water and wind as they consume vast of natural resources. Individuals should take responsibility too, by using more public transports, reuse shopping bags as they strong enough to use several times. Plus, plastic bottles the hardest material to erosion l, recycling is the best option then throwing them. In conclusion, I believe effort of individuals and by support of government together environment states on good condition for future generations.
People
are the main reason is destroying and harming the environment. To address these issue
government
should force campaigns
as well
as population
use
renewable energy from solar or wind. A single person may
effect
to nature either
good
or
bad
way.

As technology has developed,
people
are more tend to
use
wrapped products which produces more rubbish.
Clearly
overpopulation has already become on of the global problem and that means urban areas replacing suburban areas place. At the same of destroying forest
big
numbers of animals becoming
easily
victims.

To tackle the issue,
government
should attract
people
interest and involve them by
moraphony
and festivals which aimed planting and nourishing animals.
In Addition
, having strict lows would be the best solution too.
Government
must to
force
companies
use
renewable energy from solar, water and wind as they consume vast of natural resources. Individuals should take responsibility too, by using more public transports, reuse shopping bags as they strong
enough
to
use
several times. Plus, plastic bottles the hardest material to erosion l, recycling is the best option then throwing them.

In conclusion
, I believe effort of individuals and by support of
government
together environment states on
good
condition for future generations.
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IELTS essay Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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