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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. d79K
Although there are various kinds of announcements, these announcements are justified based on the emotional type of messages it conveys. In today's essay, we are going to explain two widely debated ideas related to the publication of news with reason and examples. To begin with, the first argument is based on the type of factors that influence the news editor's decision. Various up-to-date researches signify that the worst kind of information tends to last longer, more attractive to read than the beneficial ones. The above fact is the basic idea of an editorial head. For instance, If there are two articles in a newspaper one is about a terrible accident and the other is about an Olympic gold medalist. Even though, there would be people reading the later article the number of people reading the first article will be maximum. In this second paragraph, we are going to explain the fact if we get used to this bad news. The absolute fact is that we never get immersed in any type of news. These are merely pieces of information just staying for a longer duration in our minds. let's discuss Sam to understand this concept better. Sam was an energetic young boy. He once had an accident while driving his car, at that point in time one of his legs was fractured. Currently, he has recovered from his injuries, but he says that he could never forget that incident. These unforgettable memories of our miseries are the effect of bad news on us. In this final paragraph, we are going to deal with a kind of situation where more good news is being published. The most suited consequence is to report different varieties of information with absolute justice. I conclude my passage by saying that the broadcasted informations should constantly be what is right, ethical, yet cause an ultimate chance for the society we live in.
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are justified
based on the emotional type of messages it conveys. In
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explain
two
widely
debated
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ideas
related to the publication of
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news
with reason and examples.

To
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begin
with, the
first
argument
is based
on the type of factors that influence the
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news
editor's decision. Various up-to-date researches signify that the worst kind of
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information
tends to last longer, more attractive to read than the beneficial ones. The above fact is the basic
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idea
of an editorial head.
For instance
, If there are two articles in a newspaper one is about a terrible accident and the other is about an Olympic gold medalist.
Even though
, there would be
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people
reading the later article the number of
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people
reading the
first
article will be maximum.

In this second paragraph, we are going to
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explain
the fact if we
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get
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used
to this
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bad
news.

The absolute fact is that we never
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get
immersed in any type of
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news
. These are
merely
pieces of
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information
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just
staying for a longer duration in our minds.
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let
's discuss Sam to understand this concept better. Sam was an energetic young boy. He once had an accident while driving his car, at that point in time one of his legs
was fractured
.
Currently
, he has recovered from his injuries,
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but
he says that he could never forget that incident. These unforgettable memories of our miseries are the effect of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
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news
on us.

In this final paragraph, we are going to deal with a kind of situation where more
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good
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news
is
being published
. The most suited consequence is to report
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different
varieties of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
with absolute justice.

I conclude my passage by saying that the broadcasted
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informations
should
constantly
be what is right, ethical,
yet
cause an ultimate chance for the society we
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live
in.
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IELTS essay Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
316 words
6.0
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