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Preparation of tea . Task 1

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A glance at process provided reveals the information about preparation of tea. Overall, there are ten stages in the process beginning with picking fresh tea leaves and cultiminating in packing into jours. firstly, the tea leaves are picked by hand in the field then they are withering with special machine at 60% moisture out. After that, the tea leaves are delivered make cutting and rolling. There are two method for cleaning tea leaves. Firt method is traditional method, the second is modern method. The traditional method include rolling namely, the tea leaves rolled flat and broken with special device then they are enzymes released from leaves. The second method is modern method. This method include cutting namely, the tea leaves cut, torn and curled and quick process granular pieces created. After that, rolled leaves spred on tiles and cement. The next stage, the tea leaves drying with hot air dryers. Before drying tea leaves, they are mixed with enzymes and air, this result the tea leaves change to copper colour. Finally, after drying leaves, they are released flavour and aroma, and total 97% moisture out.
A glance at process provided reveals the information about preparation of
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tea
.
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, there are ten stages in the process beginning with picking fresh
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tea
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leaves
and
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cultiminating
in packing into
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jours
.
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firstly
, the
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tea
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leaves
are picked
by hand in the field then they are withering with special machine at 60% moisture out. After that, the
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tea
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leaves
are delivered
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make
cutting and rolling. There are two
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method
for cleaning
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tea
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leaves
.
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Firt
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method
is traditional
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method
, the second is modern
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method
. The traditional
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method
include rolling
namely
, the
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tea
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leaves
rolled flat and broken with special device then they are enzymes released from
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leaves
. The second
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method
is modern
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method
. This
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method
include cutting
namely
, the
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tea
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leaves
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cut
, torn and curled and quick process granular pieces created. After that, rolled
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leaves
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spred
on tiles and cement. The
next
stage, the
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tea
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drying with hot air dryers.
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Before
drying
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tea
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, they
are mixed
with enzymes and air, this result the
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tea
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leaves
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change
to copper
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colour
.
Finally
, after drying
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, they
are released
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flavour
and aroma, and total 97% moisture out.
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IELTS essay Preparation of tea . Task 1

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
185 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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