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Numerouss individals are going through health issues which cannot be avoid by latest drugs, but it can be treated by holistic medicines.

Numerouss individals are going through health issues which cannot be avoid by latest drugs, but it can be treated by holistic medicines. br5Dg
Numerouss individals are going through health issues which cannot be avoid by latest drugs, but it can be treated by holistic medicines. Im agreeing that substitute pills can be better. Alternative medicines are interventions that ddiffer from the traditional or coventional biomedical treatment of disease. This easy will shed light on it including: 1 No side effects and 2 They cost less 1. No side effects: They do not provoke ellergic reaction and do not have side effects. They are easily incorporated with skin and hair. With small quantity they are very effective as compared to synthetic cosmetics. Extracts of plant decreases the bulk properties of cosmetics and gives appropriate pharmaological effects. Easily available and found in large variety and quantity. 2. They cost less: The rising cost of prescription drugs have led the people to look for alternatives. According to the European Pharmaceutical Review, some data has indicated that alternaive medicine terapies may be less expensive than conventional medical treatments. Therefore, it means that the alternative medicine are very useful n curing diseases without much pain, high cost, etc. Due to this, many people use thee alternative medicines instead of modern medicines.
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individals
are going through health issues which cannot be
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by latest drugs,
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it can
be treated
by holistic medicines.

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agreeing that substitute pills can be better.
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Alternative
medicines are interventions that
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ddiffer
from the traditional or
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coventional
biomedical treatment of disease. This easy will shed light on it including: 1 No side effects and 2 They
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cost
less

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ellergic
reaction and do not have side effects. They are
easily
incorporated with skin and hair. With
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small
quantity they are
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very
effective as compared to synthetic cosmetics. Extracts of plant decreases the bulk properties of cosmetics and gives appropriate
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pharmaological
effects.
Easily
available and found in large variety and quantity.

2. They
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cost
less: The rising
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of prescription drugs have led the
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people
to look for
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alternatives
. According to the European Pharmaceutical Review,
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some
data has indicated that
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alternaive
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medicine
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terapies
may be less expensive than conventional medical treatments.

Therefore
, it means that the
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alternative
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medicine
are
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very
useful n curing diseases without much pain, high
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cost
, etc. Due to this,
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people
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medicines
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IELTS essay Numerouss individals are going through health issues which cannot be avoid by latest drugs, but it can be treated by holistic medicines.

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