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city life is bad for people's health .do you agree or disagree

city life is bad for people's health. jdBLp
nowadays, important city areas are expanding rapilly due to development of economic and increasing life is bad for people health. I strongly agree with that for some reasons. the first reason for my see is that countless vehicles are the main cause of traffic congestion, that creates noise that greatly impact on our lack sleeping time and individual daily activities. It is even dangerous when in traffic and easy at great risk of accident. secondly, pollution is also the cause many harmful effect on humans. Starting form a large amount of vehicles and industrial ones have cause some discase like: lung cancer and respiratory disease. The final, the water source is seriously polluted due littering indiscriminately and to waste no treatment system which led to some some skin disease and intestinal disease To sum up, I totally agree that inhabiting urban life is harmful to human health. I hope the government should care more attention to improving public transport and italy of life of the resident.
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city areas are expanding
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rapilly
due to development of economic and increasing life is
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bad
for
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people
health. I
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reasons.
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the
first
reason for my
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see
is that countless vehicles are the main cause of traffic congestion, that creates noise that
greatly
impact on our lack sleeping time and individual daily activities. It is even
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dangerous
when in traffic and easy at great
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risk
of accident.
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secondly
, pollution is
also
the cause
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many
harmful effect on humans. Starting form a large amount of vehicles and industrial ones have cause
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some
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discase
like: lung cancer and respiratory disease. The final, the water source is
seriously
polluted due littering
indiscriminately
and to waste no treatment system which led to
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some
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some
skin disease and intestinal disease To sum up, I
totally
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agree
that inhabiting urban life is harmful to human health. I hope the
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government
should care more attention to improving public transport and
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italy
of life of the resident.
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IELTS essay city life is bad for people's health.

Essay
  American English
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166 words
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