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prefer cold climate to hot climate

prefer cold climate to hot climate OR2Dy
I think it is unlikely to be true, as a cold climate is my preferred option. The hot climate makes me irritated and reduces my work efficiency. Moreover, I might waste my time playing online games since I don’t have the energy to do anything in this climate. And the air-conditioner definitely is turned on all day long, which is not very economize and may be affected to the environment. On the other hand, cold climate gives me a comfortable and cozy sensation
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it is unlikely to be true, as a
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cold
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is my preferred option. The hot
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climate
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me irritated and
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reduces
my work efficiency.
Moreover
, I might waste my time playing online games since I don’t have the energy to do anything in this
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climate
. And the air-conditioner definitely
is turned
on all day long, which is not
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very
economize and may be
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affected
to the environment.
On the other hand
,
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cold
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climate
gives me a comfortable and cozy
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sensation
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IELTS essay prefer cold climate to hot climate

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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