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I realized that I did not have enough money to pay the bill.

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I realized that I did not have enough money to pay the bill. And luckily I saw a poster looking for a waiter for a bakery and they actually hired me. It was a great pleasure. My job is just to clean up and put the menu up, it's that simple. I did very well until a group of students. They are so outrageous, I asked them what they want to eat but they don't care at all. They even make a fuss about dishes that they do not like affecting other guests. I almost lost my patience and almost yelled at them but luckily I managed to keep my cool to try to make peace with them. After that everything was resolved and I was complimented by the owner of the bakery which made me very happy. He paid me with enough money to live comfortably alone for two weeks. Later that day he invited me to work in the bakery. That makes me very proud of myself and of course, I would agree!
I realized that I did not have
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enough
money to pay the bill. And luckily I
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saw
a poster looking for a waiter for a
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bakery and
they actually hired me. It was a great pleasure. My job is
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just
to clean up and put the menu up, it's that simple. I did
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very
well until a group of students. They are
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so
outrageous, I asked them what they want to eat
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but
they don't care at all. They even
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make
a fuss about dishes that they do not like affecting other guests. I almost lost my patience and almost yelled at them
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but
luckily I managed to
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keep
my cool to try to
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make
peace with them. After that everything was
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resolved and
I
was complimented
by the owner of the bakery which made me
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very
happy. He paid me with
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enough
money to
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live
comfortably
alone for two weeks. Later that day he invited me to work in the bakery. That
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makes
me
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very
proud of myself and
of course
, I would
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agree
!

IELTS essay I realized that I did not have enough money to pay the bill.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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