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I realized that I did not have enough money to pay the bill.

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I realized that I did not have enough money to pay the bill. And luckily I saw a poster looking for a waiter for a bakery and they actually hired me. It was a great pleasure. My job is just to clean up and put the menu up, it's that simple. I did very well until a group of students. They are so outrageous, I asked them what they want to eat but they don't care at all. They even make a fuss about dishes that they do not like affecting other guests. I almost lost my patience and almost yelled at them but luckily I managed to keep my cool to try to make peace with them. After that everything was resolved and I was complimented by the owner of the bakery which made me very happy. He paid me with enough money to live comfortably alone for two weeks. Later that day he invited me to work in the bakery. That makes me very proud of myself and of course, I would agree!

I realized that I did not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 money to pay the bill. And luckily I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a poster looking for a waiter for a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).bakery, and
bakery and
 they actually hired me. It was a great pleasure. My job is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to clean up and put the menu up, it's that simple. I did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well until a group of students. They are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 outrageous, I asked them what they want to eat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they don't care at all. They even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a fuss about dishes that they do not like affecting other guests. I almost lost my patience and almost yelled at them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 luckily I managed to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 my cool to try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 peace with them. After that everything was Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).resolved, and
resolved and
 I was complimented
 by the owner of the bakery which made me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy. He paid me with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
comfortably
 alone for two weeks. Later that day he invited me to work in the bakery. That This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 proud of myself and of course
, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
! 