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Winning is most importance thing

Winning is most importance thing 2R3XJ

The winning moment is the most enjoyable time for each players. From my perspective, the process that we have during playing games is crucial. During that time, we might be through many kinds of impressions, such as happy, angry or nervous, etc, but all of those feeling are for entertainment. We don’t play games for winning, but to enjoy ourselves. And trying to win may make a corollary. For instance, we have tried so hard for winning, but the result don’t satisfy us, we will sad or angry, which makes us hald to control our reality feeling and behavior. Thus, playing games is just for entertainment.

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 to enjoy ourselves. And trying to win may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 a corollary. For instance
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 for winning, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 the result don’t satisfy us, we will sad or angry, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
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 to control our reality feeling and behavior. Thus
, playing games is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 for entertainment. 