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Possibility to exercise for everyone

Possibility to exercise for everyone lqdE9

Although taking exercise in a regular way is essentially good for everyone’s health, some people can not do that and it is not possible for all people. There are many reasonsthat people do not exercise. In my mind inability or hard diseases cause to prohibit these kinds of people to workout. Because doing exercise is forbidden for some patients such as cardiovascular patients. On the other side some people do not have enough time to attempt to do exercise. As an example some people work on two or three shifts during the day, or some people have a very busy schedule so they are not let to participate in physical activities. It is generally accepted that a planned program for exercising is vital for everyone, but unfortunately all people do not have the possibility or chance to that.

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exercise
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in a regular way
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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people
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many
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people
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exercise
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people
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enough
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exercise
. As an example This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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people
 work on two or three shifts during the day, or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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people
 have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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so
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let
 to participate in physical activities. It is generally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 that a planned program for exercising is vital for everyone, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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people
 do not have the possibility or chance to that. 