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Possibility to exercise for everyone

Possibility to exercise for everyone lqdE9
Although taking exercise in a regular way is essentially good for everyone’s health, some people can not do that and it is not possible for all people. There are many reasonsthat people do not exercise. In my mind inability or hard diseases cause to prohibit these kinds of people to workout. Because doing exercise is forbidden for some patients such as cardiovascular patients. On the other side some people do not have enough time to attempt to do exercise. As an example some people work on two or three shifts during the day, or some people have a very busy schedule so they are not let to participate in physical activities. It is generally accepted that a planned program for exercising is vital for everyone, but unfortunately all people do not have the possibility or chance to that.
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essentially
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good
for everyone’s health,
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some
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people
can not do that and it is not possible for all
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people
. There are
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many
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reasonsthat
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people
do not
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exercise
. In my mind inability or
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hard
diseases cause to prohibit these kinds of
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people
to workout.
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Because
doing
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exercise
is forbidden
for
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some
patients such as cardiovascular patients. On the other side
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some
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people
do not have
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enough
time to attempt to do
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exercise
. As an example
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some
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people
work on two or three shifts during the day, or
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some
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people
have a
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very
busy schedule
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so
they are not
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let
to participate in physical activities. It is
generally
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accepted
that a planned program for exercising is vital for everyone,
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but
unfortunately all
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people
do not have the possibility or chance to that.

IELTS essay Possibility to exercise for everyone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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