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Positive impact of covid 19

Positive impact of covid 19 30P8n
Covid 19 has appeared among us with a terrible situation. But it Teaches us a lot of positive impact. First of all, we destroyed our environment in many ways. But the world lockdown saved the whole world by pollution. And, if you consider my own side, my family members were always busy their own scheduled. They didn’t give me their most valuable time at any time. But the virus situation give me a another world. Now this time, the virus situation have certainly impacted the best bond of my family. And, most of the people didn’t maintain their own religion. But this time, they have practiced their own religion. And most time people unnecessary wasted their money, But corona virus taught the bad impact of wasting money. Besides, everyone has learned how to keep safe. Because of the lockdown, air pollution also reduced of this time
Covid 19
has appeared among us with a terrible situation.
But
it Teaches us
a lot of
positive
impact.
First of all
, we
destroyed
our environment in
many
ways.
But
the world lockdown saved the whole world by pollution. And, if you consider my
own
side, my family members were always busy their
own
scheduled. They didn’t give me their most valuable
time
at any
time
.
But
the virus situation give me
a
another world.
Now
this
time
, the virus situation have
certainly
impacted the best bond of my family. And, most of the
people
didn’t maintain their
own
religion.
But
this
time
, they have practiced their
own
religion. And most
time
people
unnecessary wasted their money,
But
corona virus
taught the
bad
impact of wasting money.
Besides
, everyone has learned how to
keep
safe.
Because
of the lockdown, air pollution
also
reduced
of this
time
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IELTS essay Positive impact of covid 19

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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