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talk about these your members family

talk about these your members family E71Jr
i was born into a peaceful household. there are four people in my family. just my mother, sister, and grandmother. and they are the most important things in my life. i get along with my mom. since i grown up, she has taken care of me, so no one comprehends me better than my mother. i think we're a close, happy family. we do a lot of things together, particularly preparing food and share everything.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was born
into a peaceful household.
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there
are four
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people
in my family.
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just
my mother, sister, and grandmother.
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and
they are the most
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important
things in my life.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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get
along with my mom.
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since
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i
Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "grew"?
grown
up, she has taken care of me,
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so
no one comprehends me better than my mother.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
we're a close, happy family.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
we
do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
things together,
particularly
preparing food and share everything.

IELTS essay talk about these your members family

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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