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talk about these your members family

talk about these your members family E71Jr

i was born into a peaceful household. there are four people in my family. just my mother, sister, and grandmother. and they are the most important things in my life. i get along with my mom. since i grown up, she has taken care of me, so no one comprehends me better than my mother. i think we're a close, happy family. we do a lot of things together, particularly preparing food and share everything.

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
was born
 into a peaceful household. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 are four This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in my family. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterJust
just
 my mother, sister, and grandmother. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 they are the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 things in my life. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 along with my mom. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSince
since
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "grew"?grew
grown
 up, she has taken care of me, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 no one comprehends me better than my mother. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 we're a close, happy family. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 things together, particularly
 preparing food and share everything. 