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Impact of covid on online students at jums kalkaji

Impact of covid on online students at jums kalkaji dpmJP
Teaching is one of the most difficult jobs someone can grab. The pandemic has shut down every institution of our country. Educating has gone online as a result of Covid-19. All schools across the globe have shut and over 1. 2 billion kids are out of school. Online schooling happens over the web. It is likewise called e-learning. Therefore learning online is a big task for every aspirant. There is no up close and personal discussion among instructors and understudies. This puts a barrier to communication skills and personality development. But what if I tell at JIMS everything is prevailing. JIMS is one of the finest colleges of IP university. The Institute was established in 1997. JIMS Kalkaji is positioned by NIRF in the main 100 organizations in India, 27 among the best B-Schools in India and 13 in North India in 2020 by Times of India. It is the lead School of the JIMS Group. In our college, online education Has been used as an opportunity to succeed in tough times. Faculty members in our college are highly knowledgeable. They are very supportive and helpful. The teachers of our school have always put extra effort in difficult duration. The school has also given the change conducting of hybrid mode classes. In which every student has a chance to take offline classes. This means college was taking classes online as well as offline to assist their aspirants. Moreover, the college is very promising for its placement. Every year more than 80 per cent of learners are getting on-campus jobs. The University has very optimistic records when it comes to career. Not only that, we aim for excellence not only in academics but also in extra curriculum and sports. Every year our college participates in different competitions to support our students. Furthermore, JIMS provides two postgraduate programs, including Post Graduate Diploma in Management (PGDM) and PGDM in International Business. Due to COVID, it was very rigid for PGDM students to get practical knowledge. However, the faculty took the whole responsibility and took the initiative to help their students. This pandemic has utterly disrupted the education system. Can the move to online learning be helping or our system needs more effective modes? Honestly, we can’t justify any of the reasons for not being leaner. I would like to mention change is the only thing constant and our institution is implementing that
Teaching is one of the most difficult jobs someone can grab. The pandemic has shut down every institution of our country. Educating has gone
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online
as a result
of Covid-19. All
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schools
across the globe have shut and over 1. 2 billion kids are out of
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school
.
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Online
schooling happens over the web. It is
likewise
called e-learning.

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Therefore
learning
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online
is a
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big
task for every aspirant. There is no up close and personal discussion among instructors and understudies. This puts a barrier to communication
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skills
and personality development.

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But
what if I
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tell
at
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JIMS
everything is prevailing.
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JIMS
is one of the finest colleges of IP university. The Institute
was established
in 1997.
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JIMS
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Kalkaji
is positioned
by
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NIRF
in the main 100 organizations in India, 27 among the best B-Schools in India and 13 in North India in 2020 by Times of India. It is the lead
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School
of the
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JIMS
Group. In our college,
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online
education Has been
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used
as an opportunity to succeed in tough times. Faculty members in our college are
highly
knowledgeable. They are
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very
supportive and helpful. The teachers of our
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school
have always put extra effort in difficult duration. The
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school
has
also
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given
the
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change
conducting of hybrid mode classes. In which every student has a chance to take offline classes. This means college was taking classes
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online
as well
as offline to assist their aspirants.

Moreover
, the college is
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very
promising for its placement. Every year more than 80 per cent of learners
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are
getting on-campus jobs.

The University has
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very
optimistic records when it
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comes
to career. Not
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only
that, we aim for excellence not
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only
in academics
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but
also
in extra curriculum and sports. Every year our college participates in
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different
competitions to support our students.

Furthermore
,
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JIMS
provides two postgraduate programs, including Post Graduate Diploma in Management (
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PGDM
) and
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PGDM
in International Business. Due to
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COVID
, it was
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very
rigid for
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PGDM
students to
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get
practical knowledge.
However
, the faculty took the whole responsibility and took the initiative to
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help
their students.

This pandemic has
utterly
disrupted the education system. Can the
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move
to
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online
learning
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be
helping or our system needs more effective modes?
Honestly
, we can’t justify any of the reasons for not being leaner. I would like to mention
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change
is the
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only
thing constant and our institution is implementing
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IELTS essay Impact of covid on online students at jums kalkaji

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7 paragraphs
398 words
5.5
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