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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. with this opinion? E2yL

It is well known that worldwide sporting events, such as the football world cup, plays vital role to reduce global tension and release patriotic feelings in a secure way. This essay agrees with the statement that an international sport occasions are essential to alleviate stress between nations. Firstly, this type of occasions helps to develop better relationship between countries. Secondly, it helps to increase transportation goods leads to rise economy.

It is well known that worldwide sporting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
, such as the football world cup, plays vital role to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 global tension and release patriotic feelings Consider replacing "in a secure way" with the adverb for "secure"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a secure way
. This essay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
 with the statement that an international sport Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "occasion"?occasion
occasions
 are essential to alleviate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 between nations. Firstly
, this type of occasions This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to develop better relationship between countries. Secondly
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to increase transportation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 leads to rise economy. 

IELTS essay Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. with this opinion?

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American English

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70 words

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