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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. with this opinion? E2yL
It is well known that worldwide sporting events, such as the football world cup, plays vital role to reduce global tension and release patriotic feelings in a secure way. This essay agrees with the statement that an international sport occasions are essential to alleviate stress between nations. Firstly, this type of occasions helps to develop better relationship between countries. Secondly, it helps to increase transportation goods leads to rise economy.
It is well known that worldwide sporting
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events
, such as the football world cup, plays vital role to
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reduce
global tension and release patriotic feelings
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in a secure way
. This essay
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agrees
with the statement that an international sport
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occasions
are essential to alleviate
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stress
between nations.
Firstly
, this type of occasions
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helps
to develop better relationship between countries.
Secondly
, it
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helps
to increase transportation
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goods
leads to rise economy.
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IELTS essay Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. with this opinion?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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